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Lurking shadows

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Hello guys im back, how are yall

12:05:55 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

ment snake sorry trying to type fast XD

12:04:45 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@Pink also thanks I will now I have only a few more to make XD then I need to make the docters and lab place and give all a companion XD

12:02:47 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@ pink She much like the other less then pure wolves love to drain others.... how else have some of mine lived so long XD

12:02:29 Kneecap stealer

Why can't she "siphon life" from her own pack instead of mine XD what does your wolf have against me

12:01:29 Kneecap stealer

She's "siphoning life" off my BE trainees from another pack XD

12:00:07 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@Pink again shes living off others let her siphon life off some sacrifices

11:59:31 Eas

Exploring time again

11:57:39 Kneecap stealer

Also I think the last time u told acorn off she didn't listen, she did it again T^T

11:57:00 Kneecap stealer

Do it serpents XD I wanna see how that will turn out

11:56:03 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

does a Lynx+dragon/snak hybrid sound fitting for a glass elemental? what ever the heck that will be XD

11:54:31 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

i ned to try and get ready to sleep or calm down and realx before I try and sleep

11:53:39 Kneecap stealer

-WP Click-

Look at him🥹🥹🥹🥹😭😭😭😭😭 I'm so proud

11:51:38 Kneecap stealer

I got a boy that looks exactly like her🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹 after so long and so many tries I can finally say I'm proud of my girl

11:51:07 Eas

I see, I do have another who is at 89 and not in labor. Shes 17 years old though. Im surprised she made it through today

11:50:17 Kneecap stealer

Sometimes it's like that with me but I wasn't expecting her to go into popping mode until tomorrow

11:50:10 Eas

89 hours and in labor*

11:49:36 Eas

Pink Kitty (i dont know what your like to be called :,)
too early? I have one whose pretty far in labor who just won’t pop >_>

11:48:30 Kneecap stealer

Rivere is in labor at 83 hours! Too early!

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Golden Midnight

12:10:54

Hellooo

Lurking shadows

12:06:46

Hello guys im back, how are yall

12:05:55 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

ment snake sorry trying to type fast XD

12:04:45 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@Pink also thanks I will now I have only a few more to make XD then I need to make the docters and lab place and give all a companion XD

12:02:47 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@ pink She much like the other less then pure wolves love to drain others.... how else have some of mine lived so long XD

12:02:29 Kneecap stealer

Why can't she "siphon life" from her own pack instead of mine XD what does your wolf have against me

12:01:29 Kneecap stealer

She's "siphoning life" off my BE trainees from another pack XD

12:00:07 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@Pink again shes living off others let her siphon life off some sacrifices

11:59:31 Eas

Exploring time again

11:57:39 Kneecap stealer

Also I think the last time u told acorn off she didn't listen, she did it again T^T

11:57:00 Kneecap stealer

Do it serpents XD I wanna see how that will turn out

11:56:03 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

does a Lynx+dragon/snak hybrid sound fitting for a glass elemental? what ever the heck that will be XD

11:54:31 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

i ned to try and get ready to sleep or calm down and realx before I try and sleep

11:53:39 Kneecap stealer

-WP Click-

Look at him🥹🥹🥹🥹😭😭😭😭😭 I'm so proud

11:51:38 Kneecap stealer

I got a boy that looks exactly like her🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹 after so long and so many tries I can finally say I'm proud of my girl

11:51:07 Eas

I see, I do have another who is at 89 and not in labor. Shes 17 years old though. Im surprised she made it through today

11:50:17 Kneecap stealer

Sometimes it's like that with me but I wasn't expecting her to go into popping mode until tomorrow

11:50:10 Eas

89 hours and in labor*

11:49:36 Eas

Pink Kitty (i dont know what your like to be called :,)
too early? I have one whose pretty far in labor who just won’t pop >_>

11:48:30 Kneecap stealer

Rivere is in labor at 83 hours! Too early!

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM

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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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