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I'll try my OCs always turn out weird but this one should be fine since I kinda have a reference, it's gonna be a fae human thing. I'll show you if he looks good.
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listening to abracadabra by iornmouse is fire! XD
 EvergreenHills
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NRC
Do it :0
 The Hunters/Hunted
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NRC
ooo~! imm make a poll, yours will be one :D
 Night Raven College
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 The Hunters/Hunted
11:30:22 toe licker
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tryna name em, i don't know what though TvT
 Night Raven College
11:29:58 NRC/Raven
Hunter
Ooooo
 Night Raven College
11:29:46 NRC/Raven
Might draw an OC that's in my mind that I think will look cool
 Night Raven College
11:29:19 NRC/Raven
Hi Hunter,
Hi Ever,
I'm doing well just got back from church.
 The Hunters/Hunted
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mwehehehhehe

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 EvergreenHills
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Heya NRC ! How are ya ?
 Night Raven College
11:28:26 NRC/Raven
His*
 The Hunters/Hunted
11:28:22 toe licker
bye owl! <3
 Night Raven College
11:28:21 NRC/Raven
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At least now pelt doesn't look awful
 The Hunters/Hunted
11:28:14 toe licker
hi NRC!!
 East MountainClan
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Lol bye Owl
 East MountainClan
11:27:30 Edith, Edie, Stella
That's fun Owl. If I did that I feel like I'd go insane cuz I'd probably end up getting repetitive after a while <_>
Honestly I struggle with names sometimes
 Night Raven College
11:26:58 NRC/Raven
Also hello
 Night Raven College
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Lol
 Owlstar
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All names must end in tail. And bye!! Gotta poof

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 Night Raven College
11:32:41 NRC/Raven
Ever
I'll try my OCs always turn out weird but this one should be fine since I kinda have a reference, it's gonna be a fae human thing. I'll show you if he looks good.
 The Hunters/Hunted
11:32:28 toe licker
listening to abracadabra by iornmouse is fire! XD
 EvergreenHills
11:31:15 Juicy Arm Boy
NRC
Do it :0
 The Hunters/Hunted
11:31:14 toe licker
NRC
ooo~! imm make a poll, yours will be one :D
 Night Raven College
11:30:37 NRC/Raven
Galaxy Waves
 The Hunters/Hunted
11:30:22 toe licker
NRC
tryna name em, i don't know what though TvT
 Night Raven College
11:29:58 NRC/Raven
Hunter
Ooooo
 Night Raven College
11:29:46 NRC/Raven
Might draw an OC that's in my mind that I think will look cool
 Night Raven College
11:29:19 NRC/Raven
Hi Hunter,
Hi Ever,
I'm doing well just got back from church.
 The Hunters/Hunted
11:28:59 toe licker
mwehehehhehe

-WP Click-
 EvergreenHills
11:28:35 Juicy Arm Boy
Heya NRC ! How are ya ?
 Night Raven College
11:28:26 NRC/Raven
His*
 The Hunters/Hunted
11:28:22 toe licker
bye owl! <3
 Night Raven College
11:28:21 NRC/Raven
-WP Click-
At least now pelt doesn't look awful
 The Hunters/Hunted
11:28:14 toe licker
hi NRC!!
 East MountainClan
11:27:56 Edith, Edie, Stella
Lol bye Owl
 East MountainClan
11:27:30 Edith, Edie, Stella
That's fun Owl. If I did that I feel like I'd go insane cuz I'd probably end up getting repetitive after a while <_>
Honestly I struggle with names sometimes
 Night Raven College
11:26:58 NRC/Raven
Also hello
 Night Raven College
11:26:53 NRC/Raven
Lol
 Owlstar
11:26:40 tiger\Owl|she\her
All names must end in tail. And bye!! Gotta poof




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Tear into my artMay 11, 2020 04:00 PM


Eternity

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BOOM

ANOTHER ONE

Alright, leave the black lined one I'm happy with that. Please just help with the red one.



This thread has indeed been reused.


Edited at July 9, 2020 02:33 PM by Eternity
Tear into my artMay 11, 2020 04:04 PM


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It looks good, besides the size of the tail. A little more fluff on the legs, they look pretty bare.

Edited at May 11, 2020 04:05 PM by Deceit
Tear into my artMay 11, 2020 04:06 PM


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Deceit said:
It looks good, besides the size of the tail. A little more fluff on the legs, they look pretty bare.


Thanks! I'll consider adding some fluff on the legs.
Tear into my artMay 11, 2020 04:07 PM


Sabbath

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I think one thing that's throwing me off with it is the back legs. The right-back leg seems to be down lower than the left-back leg and it's messing up the perspective.
I love the tail btw
Tear into my artMay 11, 2020 04:09 PM


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Really what I can offer are the haunches, and shoulders..? They need to be a little more thicker, and muscular, if that makes sense?
(Credits to Jessica Gibson)
Make the haunches a little more point, in a sense.

Edited at May 11, 2020 04:11 PM by Reathmuaz
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Sabbath said:
I think one thing that's throwing me off with it is the back legs. The right-back leg seems to be down lower than the left-back leg and it's messing up the perspective.
I love the tail btw


Thank you! :D That's super helpful-
I've added one with altered back legs now, so hopefully, that improves the perspective?
Thanks! I like the tail too- well, I like the concept--
Tear into my artMay 11, 2020 04:13 PM


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Reathmuaz said:
Really what I can offer are the haunches, and shoulders..? They need to be a little more thicker, and muscular, if that makes sense?
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(Credits to Jessica Gibson)
Make the haunches a little more point, in a sense.


Thank you-
That's deffo helpful. I'm gonna put him a little on the skinnier side, but that picture illustrates the base stuff I need to follow like,,, a lot-

Edited at May 11, 2020 04:13 PM by Eternity
Tear into my artMay 11, 2020 04:42 PM


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From considering my own style-
idk if it will help at all-
bring the chest a little lower down. Like just pull the sternum a little lower and round it. Then like Reath said, those shoulders and hips *^* also agreeing with Sabbath lol (I'm sorry I piggybacked-)
Tear into my artMay 11, 2020 04:51 PM


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Thanks Bro! <3
I'm honestly giving up with this lowered head to come back to on a later date, I'll raise the head up instead as I'm more confident with that. :')
Tear into my artMay 11, 2020 05:00 PM


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I agree with others on the left bAck leg, it looks off.
The head also look weirdly small too me. But that might be because my drawings have say too big heads

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