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 MLadySkylar
05:34:04 P'Sky/Sky-kun
What?
 BraveHeart
05:33:19 Mother Brave
Alright that’s the last of me using chat :’) I’ll forever be lurking since I got suspended :’D
 BraveHeart
05:31:06 Mother Brave
Hey Sky
 BraveHeart
05:30:38 Mother Brave
Will!!! Hey hey >:3
 Wild Runners
05:29:06 Stalking chat
Eye ball,
Cya!
 MLadySkylar
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Heyo
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05:27:43 Will
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Mother brave!!!
πŸ–πŸ–
 Eye of Eternity
05:26:59 tern | they/he
cloud
ooh nice :0

ive gotta go now, see yall
 SouthernScorpion
05:26:39 Scorpion
he will be going nowhere, I love hims and will breed him for another pup of the line eventually
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I hope she gives me something good
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 Cloudy bird
05:24:59 
Scorpion
That kind of thing happened to me too! Got a divine health wolf from my starter wolves, and then got Unparalleled Learning girlie.
But it is infuriating when actually trying to breed for the boosts wolves, especially in this months I am getting not as lucky as I used to
 SouthernScorpion
05:23:24 Scorpion
I am working, and all i can listen to while doing my calls is Lemon Pound Cake
 snake
05:21:49 
Cloudy
ooh :o
 SouthernScorpion
05:21:36 Scorpion
and neither parent was a hero
 Cloudy bird
05:21:23 
Eve
Stop eating all my boosted pups >:'(
(jk)
 SouthernScorpion
05:21:11 Scorpion
even with numbers though, there is a gamble
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this boy came from high rarity parents, with no boosts or defects
 Wild Runners
05:19:51 Stalking chat
Eve,
yeah I just realized that,
thank you though.
 Cloudy bird
05:19:22 
snake
Nah, it is even more sillier than that. I was in PvP, and see my wolves are not full health. But it's just my opponent already attacked right as the PvP got started, and my brain lagged for some reason
 SouthernScorpion
05:19:19 Scorpion
you'll have to buy or breed already high talented wolves for that

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 MLadySkylar
05:34:04 P'Sky/Sky-kun
What?
 BraveHeart
05:33:19 Mother Brave
Alright that’s the last of me using chat :’) I’ll forever be lurking since I got suspended :’D
 BraveHeart
05:31:06 Mother Brave
Hey Sky
 BraveHeart
05:30:38 Mother Brave
Will!!! Hey hey >:3
 Wild Runners
05:29:06 Stalking chat
Eye ball,
Cya!
 MLadySkylar
05:27:54 P'Sky/Sky-kun
Heyo
 St. Cloverbeast
05:27:43 Will
@Brave

Mother brave!!!
πŸ–πŸ–
 Eye of Eternity
05:26:59 tern | they/he
cloud
ooh nice :0

ive gotta go now, see yall
 SouthernScorpion
05:26:39 Scorpion
he will be going nowhere, I love hims and will breed him for another pup of the line eventually
 Wild Runners
05:26:14 Stalking chat
-WP Click-

I hope she gives me something good
 BraveHeart
05:25:54 Mother Brave
Oh hey- I’m back.
 Cloudy bird
05:24:59 
Scorpion
That kind of thing happened to me too! Got a divine health wolf from my starter wolves, and then got Unparalleled Learning girlie.
But it is infuriating when actually trying to breed for the boosts wolves, especially in this months I am getting not as lucky as I used to
 SouthernScorpion
05:23:24 Scorpion
I am working, and all i can listen to while doing my calls is Lemon Pound Cake
 snake
05:21:49 
Cloudy
ooh :o
 SouthernScorpion
05:21:36 Scorpion
and neither parent was a hero
 Cloudy bird
05:21:23 
Eve
Stop eating all my boosted pups >:'(
(jk)
 SouthernScorpion
05:21:11 Scorpion
even with numbers though, there is a gamble
-WP Click-
this boy came from high rarity parents, with no boosts or defects
 Wild Runners
05:19:51 Stalking chat
Eve,
yeah I just realized that,
thank you though.
 Cloudy bird
05:19:22 
snake
Nah, it is even more sillier than that. I was in PvP, and see my wolves are not full health. But it's just my opponent already attacked right as the PvP got started, and my brain lagged for some reason
 SouthernScorpion
05:19:19 Scorpion
you'll have to buy or breed already high talented wolves for that




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Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 04:08 AM


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Seriously, don't hold back. I want to improve, and the only way to do that it with some good, honest critiques. All are wanted and very much appreciated :)



Link to my art gallery:
https://wolfplaygame.com/forums.php?f=5&t=26299&page=1

But, if you're lazy like me, here are some of my most recent artworks:
https://i.postimg.cc/5041gScN/Summer-Storm-Raffle.jpg

https://i.postimg.cc/C1TJpcMS/Xery-Ref-Sheet.jpg

https://i.postimg.cc/qvrjFbRr/Familiar-Background.jpg


Edited at July 11, 2019 04:14 AM by Wood Carve
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:22 PM


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I can give negative feedback. It’s perfect. Maybe draw each individual hair on the Animals? I donΒ’ know.

Edited at July 11, 2019 03:22 PM by CanadianGirl
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:22 PM


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I really like your art! I'd love an avatar from you
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:23 PM


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bro what
i tried to come up with some constructive criticism but i cant
your art is so perfect
like the composition, colors, background, everything
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:23 PM


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mara's pack said:
bro what
i tried to come up with some constructive criticism but i cant
your art is so perfect
like the composition, colors, background, everything


Same! My answer stands!
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:35 PM


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Your art is pretty good, I especially like the last piece (the gold field).
The main thing that stuck out and- in my opinion- doesn't seem to mesh well with the rest of the piece: is the brightness in color for the wolf(?) in the first image.

I think the only main parts that should be as bright as it is, would be: the back and the beginning of the tail. The rest should be a bit darker, since it would be in the shade.
I did notice that you added shadow around the head/front of the animal, so that's good.
Besides that, I only have two nitpicks:

-The grass along the edges of the trees are a bit too bright as well, just a hint too bright
-The rocks(?) also seem very white, rather than a more grey. That could be the type of rock, I'm unsure, but they really jumped out at me and took some attention away from the animal and fire, which I felt where the main focus points.

Aside from those minor things, again, your art is very beautiful. :)
Keep up the great work!
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:39 PM


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Thank you Mossious <3 I'll keep those in mind for the next thing I draw :D
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:40 PM


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You're welcome and best of luck to you. 8D
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 07:48 PM


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You're a super talented artist, first of all <3

I just want to say that one thing I am SUPER jealous of in your art is your backgrounds and environments. They're just so good and detailed, and pretty, and /gah/. I love em. :'D

One thing I do think that you can improve on, though, is the shading of your characters. It just looks a little too... soft and blended together, and sometimes causes them to blend in a bit too much with the background. I think just a bit more detail in your shading and a bit less smudging would make your art go a loooong way.

One other minor thing I wanted to critique, is that when making ref sheets, try to make the background color a bit more muted. On the sheet of Xery, for example, the red is a bit too bright and blends in with the red of the character, and makes it kind of hard to look at. It might benefit to desaturate the background a little bit, or make it darker/lighter, or even make it a different color entirely that just compliments the character.

That's about all I have to say. Your art is /super/ solid, and I can't wait to see you improve and have your art become more amazing in the future :D
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 07:50 PM


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Thank you Dash!! <3

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