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Closing my minecraft just to open an art program and spend the next three hours drawing. Im so screentime pilled.

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Aww! To bad :/

11:42:42 Many moons, one me

Aura
Right? Only problem is I can't use it, I don't have premium. I'm going to put it in my market and hopefully someone wants it

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Andy
Oh no! 😂😭

11:31:13 Andy [he/they]

fighting for my life right now. I've been terraforming my Minecraft world for so long I'm seeing cubes everywhere

11:28:49 Aura/Pea

Moons
IMAO wow! What a find!

11:22:34 Many moons, one me

Sable sniffs under a bush and finds Greenhouse!
Stats: Luck +3
Mood: Triumphant
... A whole greenhouse? Impressive

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RP anybody? PM me!

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Moons

Oo!

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They're going to make me wait, aren't they?
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Hi!

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no problem ^^

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oh no.

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no i think its 10

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animation/timing help/ criticism needed

June 8, 2023 10:41 AM

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Working on a mini amv, i'm trying to get it done by (this) friday

Somethings off with the timing, can't tell what it is :/

i don't really like the first frame, so i might get rid of it/change it. It doesn't really hold the feeling of weight/locomotion

Edited at June 8, 2023 10:42 AM by Krampus

animation/timing help/ criticism needed

June 8, 2023 05:29 PM

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Hmm it looks like you might need more in-betweens, unless that's what you were planning to do.

There's also not a lot of anticipation in the first few frames of the action, which may be why it feels so stiff.

I'd reccomend looking at smear/smush frames and trying those out to get a bit more movement going!

Overall it's really good and good luck with the rest of the project!

Edited at June 8, 2023 05:29 PM by Beetle Tea

animation/timing help/ criticism needed

June 8, 2023 06:35 PM

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Beetle Tea said:

Hmm it looks like you might need more in-betweens, unless that's what you were planning to do.

There's also not a lot of anticipation in the first few frames of the action, which may be why it feels so stiff.

I'd reccomend looking at smear/smush frames and trying those out to get a bit more movement going!

Overall it's really good and good luck with the rest of the project!

i just realised in the last action, i meant to put a flicking of the head/eyes, (as a secondary action) and completely forgot about it.

Not a lot of smear/smush frames here, i'll look into adding those.

thank you for your advice! ^^

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