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09:50:07 tiger\Owl|she\her

-WP Click- shes gonna have beautiful pups

09:48:36 Your local therapist

Labor is 2-5 hours. Total pregnancy times ranges from 80-96 hours without counting labor, and then 82-101 hours with the labor time added.

09:40:41

While you are on the subject, pregnancy takes about 4 days, but do we know the min/ max hours total? And how many hours min/ max for labor?

09:38:16 Cervo

Ive been waitng for this wolf too go into labor for hours at this point, think shes waiting the full 96 hours

09:37:06 Winter

I've got this girlie I shoulda chucked in my raffle -WP Click-

09:13:14 Phoenix~

hola

09:10:26 Anthony // He/they

hi chat

09:08:41 tiger\Owl|she\her

doodle are you a therian?? i know i am!! im always looking for other therinans.

09:03:51 ezra, he/him

aura-
when they're defeated in battle and flee there's a small chance they'll get injured

08:58:09 He/They pronouns

Vote pretty please :3

-WP Click-

08:44:58 Aura/Pea

How do you injure your wolf?

08:35:10

Okay fire

08:32:37 Aura/Pea

I can see her now!

08:29:52

Think I fixed it

08:26:50 Aura/Pea

It's the same for me!

08:26:04 Husky

-Click-
Tartarus died

08:25:56

She's one with the darkness i guess lol

Night Raven College

08:24:24 NRC/Raven

Yeah she does unless I click her

08:24:22

Strange

08:23:50 tiger\Owl|she\her

yeah for me

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09:50:07 tiger\Owl|she\her

-WP Click- shes gonna have beautiful pups

09:48:36 Your local therapist

Labor is 2-5 hours. Total pregnancy times ranges from 80-96 hours without counting labor, and then 82-101 hours with the labor time added.

09:40:41

While you are on the subject, pregnancy takes about 4 days, but do we know the min/ max hours total? And how many hours min/ max for labor?

09:38:16 Cervo

Ive been waitng for this wolf too go into labor for hours at this point, think shes waiting the full 96 hours

09:37:06 Winter

I've got this girlie I shoulda chucked in my raffle -WP Click-

09:13:14 Phoenix~

hola

09:10:26 Anthony // He/they

hi chat

09:08:41 tiger\Owl|she\her

doodle are you a therian?? i know i am!! im always looking for other therinans.

09:03:51 ezra, he/him

aura-
when they're defeated in battle and flee there's a small chance they'll get injured

08:58:09 He/They pronouns

Vote pretty please :3

-WP Click-

08:44:58 Aura/Pea

How do you injure your wolf?

08:35:10

Okay fire

08:32:37 Aura/Pea

I can see her now!

08:29:52

Think I fixed it

08:26:50 Aura/Pea

It's the same for me!

08:26:04 Husky

-Click-
Tartarus died

08:25:56

She's one with the darkness i guess lol

Night Raven College

08:24:24 NRC/Raven

Yeah she does unless I click her

08:24:22

Strange

08:23:50 tiger\Owl|she\her

yeah for me

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June 25, 2019 04:58 PM

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I'm working on a Creature for my Adoptable and I got stuck on the eye mouth and how I should do the feathers on the wings any Advise and Critique would be amazing.

https://i.postimg.cc/nr1Lqhkh/IMG-3236.jpg

((Made by me duh))

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June 25, 2019 05:06 PM

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The picture looks kind-of confusing to me, but I will try my best to give some critique!

- Add more of a. . . chest, I guess?

- Adjust the stomach and lower it

- Add the other side limbs (if they are there, I cannot see them >.<)

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June 25, 2019 05:09 PM

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❦Amaris said:
The picture looks kind-of confusing to me, but I will try my best to give some critique!

- Add more of a. . . chest, I guess?
- Adjust the stomach and lower it
- Add the other side limbs (if they are there, I cannot see them >.<)

Thanks it's still a W.I.P so it's gonna be a little confusing.

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June 25, 2019 05:16 PM

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The maw, or mouth, is a little boxy. Make it a little more narrow, since I can see this is a dragon-like design. Dragons normally have a slender physique, unless you want a bulky one. Then you'd have to shorten the muzzle and make it more broad. The upper.. joints? I dunno the word, but the more upper half of the limbs (arms, legs) are too.. beefy. Make them a little more slender. For the eyes, try something that's like an almond like shape. Eyes are normally almond shaped, in a way. Like an Ellipse, google if you don't know what it is. It's an Earth Science term. This is all I got for now, but as you progress I can add more critiques

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June 25, 2019 06:56 PM

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Wolffang said:
The maw, or mouth, is a little boxy. Make it a little more narrow, since I can see this is a dragon-like design. Dragons normally have a slender physique, unless you want a bulky one. Then you'd have to shorten the muzzle and make it more broad. The upper.. joints? I dunno the word, but the more upper half of the limbs (arms, legs) are too.. beefy. Make them a little more slender. For the eyes, try something that's like an almond like shape. Eyes are normally almond shaped, in a way. Like an Ellipse, google if you don't know what it is. It's an Earth Science term. This is all I got for now, but as you progress I can add more critiques

Thanks

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