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I have to get 57 stones a day to afford all the Gear + Dyes +Background

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xd and im hoping people like the gear/decor so that I can open my event shop again

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I love the gear for this months event ugh, I gotta get on my explore game

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eeeehhhh i have so much work to do, i don't want to

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Eh, probably about to crash if I'm honest

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05:54:59 Sorrowful Howls

@demon heyo, god i hate retraing wolves. usually its fine but i like having a dream team ready, now i got nothing

how are you

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Heya!

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Hey.

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@chat congrats^^

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05:17:50 Sorrowful Howls

@ven oh ok i figured it was already said

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Anyways back to work for me

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Venn
I think i saw it was reported because a lot of people experienced this so i am just waiting it out

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06:26:09 Sorrowful Howls

@Demon :))

06:24:05 fruck frontman

good mornin chat :)

06:22:56 The Scary Mod

I have to get 57 stones a day to afford all the Gear + Dyes +Background

CriesInTheNight

06:20:43 Sorrowful Howls

xd and im hoping people like the gear/decor so that I can open my event shop again

06:19:20 The Scary Mod

I love the gear for this months event ugh, I gotta get on my explore game

06:15:36 Don't call me BJ.

eeeehhhh i have so much work to do, i don't want to

05:58:04 southern lil' miss

Looking for a RP partner; must be able to type 500+ words. Proper grammer and spelling please; Pm me. ^^'

05:57:06 The Scary Mod

@Cries
Eh, probably about to crash if I'm honest

CriesInTheNight

05:54:59 Sorrowful Howls

@demon heyo, god i hate retraing wolves. usually its fine but i like having a dream team ready, now i got nothing

how are you

05:48:56 The Scary Mod

@Cries , Ven
Heya!

05:48:28 southern lil' miss

Missed my five years here o.e oup

05:46:17 southern lil' miss

Hey.

CriesInTheNight

05:40:34 Sorrowful Howls

@chat congrats^^

05:30:49 Venn/Venne

Grandma rubbed off on my mom. Now my mom won't stop talking. 😭

05:20:50

Got top Explorer of thr week for the first y time ever ^^

CriesInTheNight

05:17:50 Sorrowful Howls

@ven oh ok i figured it was already said

05:16:44 Amy/Anpmygdala

Anyways back to work for me

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Venn
I think i saw it was reported because a lot of people experienced this so i am just waiting it out

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Have you guys reported the lag yet? Eve won't know if you don't complain.

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November 9, 2017 10:25 PM

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https://s2.postimg.org/cm6tysat5/Screen_Shot_2017-11-09_at_11.21.15_PM.png

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Edited at November 9, 2017 10:28 PM by Aphmau clan

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November 9, 2017 10:28 PM

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Not bad (\^-^/)

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November 9, 2017 10:29 PM

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It's not really that bad in all honesty.

The tail and maybe the front leg on the side we're viewing could use a little work maybe, though the tail could actually depend on the breed of cat the drawing is of.

But overall it's pretty good

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:30 PM by Destinations End

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November 10, 2017 01:28 AM

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The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:

https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:

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January 1, 2018 09:11 PM

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Siarczek said:
The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:

This helps me out! Thank you

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January 3, 2018 03:49 AM

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Aww so cool!

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