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 Valentinus
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 Kháos
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Snowball-
That's great to hear. Any exciting plans for the day?
 Kháos
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I read mooo and was so confused.
 Kháos
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I just woke up 💔 I was crashing on the couch and my dad woke up so I just woke up again so he wouldn't catch me sleeping on the couch.
 VioletEcho
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Zee nooo :0
 Queen Elsa
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lol im alright.
 Kháos
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Yay <3 Hi Snowball, how are you? ^^
 Nesta
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Khaos
Go sleep
 Queen Elsa
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Jack <3
 Kháos
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I'm falling asleep over here.
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Did I miss ya Snowball? <3
 Malcuth
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Pretty girl :)
 Valentinus
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hello chat
 Nesta
09:42:29 Nes/Spider
Hey Queen

Excho
Maybe the sickness will still be there for my birthday ;-;
 Queen Elsa
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morning friends
 VioletEcho
09:33:10 Is a dinosaur rawr
Chat aww that's actually so cute!!

Zee aw mann, coughs when sick are the worst
Sickness begone ;-;
 Nesta
09:30:19 Nes/Spider
Excho
Still sick T^T
I went to urgent care on Saturday they say my lungs sound good but here I am with an unstoppable cough
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 VioletEcho
09:25:13 Is a dinosaur rawr
Zee tired, my brain is fried :0
How are you?
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 Valentinus
09:49:36 Val, Valen, Dal
How does my avatar look?
 Kháos
09:49:11 
Snowball-
That's great to hear. Any exciting plans for the day?
 Kháos
09:48:52 
I read mooo and was so confused.
 Kháos
09:48:31 
Nes-
I just woke up 💔 I was crashing on the couch and my dad woke up so I just woke up again so he wouldn't catch me sleeping on the couch.
 VioletEcho
09:48:24 Is a dinosaur rawr
Zee nooo :0
 Queen Elsa
09:47:57 Snowflake, Queen
lol im alright.
 Kháos
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Yay <3 Hi Snowball, how are you? ^^
 Nesta
09:47:35 Nes/Spider
Khaos
Go sleep
 Queen Elsa
09:47:25 Snowflake, Queen
Jack <3
 Kháos
09:46:58 
I'm falling asleep over here.
 Kháos
09:46:46 
Did I miss ya Snowball? <3
 Malcuth
09:44:20 Wander
-WP Click-
Pretty girl :)
 Valentinus
09:44:13 Val, Valen, Dal
hello chat
 Nesta
09:42:29 Nes/Spider
Hey Queen

Excho
Maybe the sickness will still be there for my birthday ;-;
 Queen Elsa
09:33:11 Snowflake, Queen
morning friends
 VioletEcho
09:33:10 Is a dinosaur rawr
Chat aww that's actually so cute!!

Zee aw mann, coughs when sick are the worst
Sickness begone ;-;
 Nesta
09:30:19 Nes/Spider
Excho
Still sick T^T
I went to urgent care on Saturday they say my lungs sound good but here I am with an unstoppable cough
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09:25:52 
Thoughts?
-Click-
Or
-Click-
 VioletEcho
09:25:13 Is a dinosaur rawr
Zee tired, my brain is fried :0
How are you?
 Nesta
09:24:14 Nes/Spider
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Need critics!November 4, 2017 10:49 PM


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So lately I've been trying to get out of drawing cartoony cats. I've been trying to add more detail (which i need work on ;;) But can someone give my picture some tips?

https://kyothered.deviantart.com/art/Eden-713461234?ga_submit_new=10%3A1509853258

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Need critics!November 19, 2017 06:19 PM


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I love the style and colouring! I just think you need to work on the head shape as it looks a tad bit more canine than feline. Otherwise, amazing work!
Need critics!December 18, 2017 08:16 PM


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Needs whiskers and the snout thingy looks too canine-ish
Need critics!December 29, 2017 04:10 PM


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The snout needs to be a little less narrow and much smaller. The ears might have to be a little bit bigger. Other than that it's pretty awesome! ^-^
Need critics!December 29, 2017 05:53 PM


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The way the fur goes on the neck - there's a part where it parts a little unnaturally, like somebody's parted it with a comb. Unless they're a housecat, I suggest that you fix that. I assume that you mean for the eyes to be shaped that way, since it's a cartoon-style drawing, but still, maybe they should be rotated more south-westward. As others have said, the snout is not a feline's; it lacks the whisker points, jowls, and softer/fatter jawline of a feline. Perhaps the ears should be a little more pointy. But all in all, it's pretty good! The coloring and background flatter the shape nicely, and said colors don't contrast overall, so it finishes cleanly. Just work on the anatomy a little more, and it would overall be pretty perfect.

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