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two of my trainees are 16?? im gonna cry if they dare kick the bucket tomorrow
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Bye Hunter(: I'll be back later
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bye NRC have a nice lunch!
 Night Raven College
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Ok off I go to have lunch (at 1Pm lol) and try to draw my Fae OC
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NRC
thanks! i was debating what to do for the mouth :D
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The smirk is cute
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ever
thanks! <3 i might change it back though TvT
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Hunters
Ooh it’s cute !
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anyone like my new avatar?? :D
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Ever
I'll try my OCs always turn out weird but this one should be fine since I kinda have a reference, it's gonna be a fae human thing. I'll show you if he looks good.
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listening to abracadabra by iornmouse is fire! XD
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NRC
Do it :0
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NRC
ooo~! imm make a poll, yours will be one :D
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NRC
tryna name em, i don't know what though TvT
 Night Raven College
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Hunter
Ooooo
 Night Raven College
11:29:46 NRC/Raven
Might draw an OC that's in my mind that I think will look cool
 Night Raven College
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Hi Hunter,
Hi Ever,
I'm doing well just got back from church.
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mwehehehhehe

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 Caeruleum
12:07:50 Caesar
two of my trainees are 16?? im gonna cry if they dare kick the bucket tomorrow
 Night Raven College
11:59:53 NRC/Raven
Bye Hunter(: I'll be back later
 EvergreenHills
11:59:43 Juicy Arm Boy
Mmm Moe’s Queso
 The Hunters/Hunted
11:59:32 toe licker
bye NRC have a nice lunch!
 Night Raven College
11:58:40 NRC/Raven
Ok off I go to have lunch (at 1Pm lol) and try to draw my Fae OC
 The Hunters/Hunted
11:57:01 toe licker
NRC
thanks! i was debating what to do for the mouth :D
 Night Raven College
11:56:14 NRC/Raven
The smirk is cute
 The Hunters/Hunted
11:55:43 toe licker
ever
thanks! <3 i might change it back though TvT
 EvergreenHills
11:54:52 Juicy Arm Boy
Hunters
Ooh it’s cute !
 The Hunters/Hunted
11:50:40 toe licker
anyone like my new avatar?? :D
 Night Raven College
11:32:41 NRC/Raven
Ever
I'll try my OCs always turn out weird but this one should be fine since I kinda have a reference, it's gonna be a fae human thing. I'll show you if he looks good.
 The Hunters/Hunted
11:32:28 toe licker
listening to abracadabra by iornmouse is fire! XD
 EvergreenHills
11:31:15 Juicy Arm Boy
NRC
Do it :0
 The Hunters/Hunted
11:31:14 toe licker
NRC
ooo~! imm make a poll, yours will be one :D
 Night Raven College
11:30:37 NRC/Raven
Galaxy Waves
 The Hunters/Hunted
11:30:22 toe licker
NRC
tryna name em, i don't know what though TvT
 Night Raven College
11:29:58 NRC/Raven
Hunter
Ooooo
 Night Raven College
11:29:46 NRC/Raven
Might draw an OC that's in my mind that I think will look cool
 Night Raven College
11:29:19 NRC/Raven
Hi Hunter,
Hi Ever,
I'm doing well just got back from church.
 The Hunters/Hunted
11:28:59 toe licker
mwehehehhehe

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Critique me!May 15, 2022 07:29 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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I have no clue what I'm doing. Gallery Link

A few hours ago I was bored and decided to become an artist with no previous experience. With that being said this is my attempt to draw an OC of mine and I would like feedback. The anatomy seems a bit funky, he is supposed to be a wolf. I also colored him. For those of you that want to, you can go over and red line stuff so I can see what to fix! If you have tips on blending and colors that would be appreciated as well. I draw using Adobe Fresco, but if there are other good apps to use, let me know.

I'll link minor stuff and put the images for more important stuff so this isn't too long. Thanks :)

OC for reference(yes the oc is mine)

All image credit from here down belongs to me.

First red line

IMG-1638.jpg

First red line and outline

Altered final outline (I have no idea how I changed it this much)

IMG-1637.jpg

Colored final product

IMG-1636.jpg

Colored final product with OG lines behind it (for comparison, also I forgot to screenshot the red line that's under it. That one is in fact the original, the first red line linked at the top is the second red line I did in order to fix this. If that makes sense.)


Edited at May 17, 2022 07:49 PM by Ciao
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:21 PM


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hello! very cute character youve got there!!

ive been drawing canines/wolves in particular for going on 6(ish) years now id say, and ive learned a lot about drawing them over the years, so im here to offer a few tips (as well as some blue lines for future reference)!

so canine anatomy is very hard to explain, but the way i improved is by studying the canine body by tracing over actual photos of wolves i found online. ive found simplifying their bodies and more specifically their limbs into simple shapes and refinining from there helps a ton for anatomy improvement!

ive bluelined over your image and focused on a few different things, and ill list the links to view them below!

these are just a few quick base sketches i whipped up within like 5 minutes so theyre not perfect, but i hope theyre able to help a bit!

you have a lot of potential and im so excited to see your improvement!! if you need anything at all dont be scared to reach out to me and ill try my best to help! :)


Edited at May 15, 2022 08:26 PM by jaune
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:53 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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Thank you for the help! I can definitely see how I can improve the design more, and the blue line especially helped. For the anatomy I think tracing a real wolf would really help as well. I appreciate your critique and i'll definitely reach out if I have more questions :)
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:07 PM


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Ah- I might be of assistance here. Anatomy is quite off, /lighthearted
If I forget to add the redlines pm me I get busy lol
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:48 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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Thanks, i'll pm you^^

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