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07:40:03 Anthony // He/they

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07:37:44 Exist / Kuskyn

I think I found myself a new favourite brush pen c.c
-Click-
It's so smoooth to draw with

07:26:38 Vash | Xy

Sky

07:23:17

What job is it?

07:11:00 P'Sky/Sky-kun

I hate this place -_-

07:10:53 P'Sky/Sky-kun

Here but trapped at work

Night Raven College

06:33:08 NRC/Raven

Ok never mind gotta go

Night Raven College

06:30:43 NRC/Raven

Hello

05:58:36 tiger\Owl|she\her

Ok!

05:55:15 Red

bye chat!

05:47:59

Got her ^^ I'll be on several times later, but you can just message me when you want her back :3

05:46:28 tiger\Owl|she\her

She’s up go grab her

05:46:01

That's no problem, I have space & time ^^

05:45:35 tiger\Owl|she\her

Ok but Itl have to be after my other one pops she’s at 70 hrs right now

05:45:18 Red

she's pretty Owl, but I can't take her.

05:44:35

Owl, I can take her, and send her back later today ^^

05:44:31 Vash | Xy

Hey

05:43:56 tiger\Owl|she\her

-WP Click- Is someone able to hold onto her for a lil bit so I got enough room for when my other girl pops?

St. Cloverbeast

05:31:46 Will

The anxiety of waiting for someone to contact you back
And also hoping you're not being annoying 😭

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07:40:03 Anthony // He/they

Hi chat

07:37:44 Exist / Kuskyn

I think I found myself a new favourite brush pen c.c
-Click-
It's so smoooth to draw with

07:26:38 Vash | Xy

Sky

07:23:17

What job is it?

07:11:00 P'Sky/Sky-kun

I hate this place -_-

07:10:53 P'Sky/Sky-kun

Here but trapped at work

Night Raven College

06:33:08 NRC/Raven

Ok never mind gotta go

Night Raven College

06:30:43 NRC/Raven

Hello

05:58:36 tiger\Owl|she\her

Ok!

05:55:15 Red

bye chat!

05:47:59

Got her ^^ I'll be on several times later, but you can just message me when you want her back :3

05:46:28 tiger\Owl|she\her

She’s up go grab her

05:46:01

That's no problem, I have space & time ^^

05:45:35 tiger\Owl|she\her

Ok but Itl have to be after my other one pops she’s at 70 hrs right now

05:45:18 Red

she's pretty Owl, but I can't take her.

05:44:35

Owl, I can take her, and send her back later today ^^

05:44:31 Vash | Xy

Hey

05:43:56 tiger\Owl|she\her

-WP Click- Is someone able to hold onto her for a lil bit so I got enough room for when my other girl pops?

St. Cloverbeast

05:31:46 Will

The anxiety of waiting for someone to contact you back
And also hoping you're not being annoying 😭

05:13:31

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September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

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Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

#2

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM

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Thanks every for the critique

Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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