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03:52:59 tiger\Owl|she\her

-WP Click- I am getting so impatient

03:50:45 Vash | Xy

I'm glad for you :DD

St. Cloverbeast

03:48:02 Will

@Xy

It's so exciting!!
I talked my sister into driving with me
Her reaction was X'D
Well
It was something lol

"So there will be a dog in the car?"

03:43:41 Caesar

left forest because i kept getting 6 bears, only to be greeted with this:
You spy 6 Grizzly Bears.

fuck you too, rng

03:43:04 Vash | Xy

Will
Yayy :DD thats awesome!! must be exciting!!

03:40:27 Stalking chat

15 mush for one shamrock..is crazy I can understand 10 but 15..

03:38:25 Caesar

looking for shards im missing to craft and prices really went 85 mush, 95 mush, 100 mush, 5 apples??? what the hell is going on with market

03:37:40 Stalking chat

What should I draw :D

03:33:33 Stalking chat

How do you guys think about the drawing?

St. Cloverbeast

03:33:07 Will

Poodle Puppy summer is official guys ;v;

03:30:10 P'Sky/Sky-kun

I'm free from work

03:28:31 Stalking chat

Moon,
-Click-

03:24:14 Vash | Xy

hot chocolate is so good

03:23:32 Many moons, one me

Ya know, I only had about 4 hours of sleep all together last night, Imma take a nap. See ya later

St. Cloverbeast

03:21:24 Will

Omgosh...
puppy ...
Guys I'm vibrating with excitement

03:18:18 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

i need to name wolves keep forgetting to

03:16:33 Caesar

i dipped for a while >.<

sorry psky, doomscroll and edits got me T-T

03:13:20 P'Sky/Sky-kun

Im over working
Im going to tell my boyfriend to let me stay home and he pays the bills 🤣🤣

03:03:28 Stalking chat

Moon,
okay!

03:02:31 Many moons, one me

Wild,
Sorry had to dip for a minute.
What about a duck on a pond?

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03:52:59 tiger\Owl|she\her

-WP Click- I am getting so impatient

03:50:45 Vash | Xy

I'm glad for you :DD

St. Cloverbeast

03:48:02 Will

@Xy

It's so exciting!!
I talked my sister into driving with me
Her reaction was X'D
Well
It was something lol

"So there will be a dog in the car?"

03:43:41 Caesar

left forest because i kept getting 6 bears, only to be greeted with this:
You spy 6 Grizzly Bears.

fuck you too, rng

03:43:04 Vash | Xy

Will
Yayy :DD thats awesome!! must be exciting!!

03:40:27 Stalking chat

15 mush for one shamrock..is crazy I can understand 10 but 15..

03:38:25 Caesar

looking for shards im missing to craft and prices really went 85 mush, 95 mush, 100 mush, 5 apples??? what the hell is going on with market

03:37:40 Stalking chat

What should I draw :D

03:33:33 Stalking chat

How do you guys think about the drawing?

St. Cloverbeast

03:33:07 Will

Poodle Puppy summer is official guys ;v;

03:30:10 P'Sky/Sky-kun

I'm free from work

03:28:31 Stalking chat

Moon,
-Click-

03:24:14 Vash | Xy

hot chocolate is so good

03:23:32 Many moons, one me

Ya know, I only had about 4 hours of sleep all together last night, Imma take a nap. See ya later

St. Cloverbeast

03:21:24 Will

Omgosh...
puppy ...
Guys I'm vibrating with excitement

03:18:18 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

i need to name wolves keep forgetting to

03:16:33 Caesar

i dipped for a while >.<

sorry psky, doomscroll and edits got me T-T

03:13:20 P'Sky/Sky-kun

Im over working
Im going to tell my boyfriend to let me stay home and he pays the bills 🤣🤣

03:03:28 Stalking chat

Moon,
okay!

03:02:31 Many moons, one me

Wild,
Sorry had to dip for a minute.
What about a duck on a pond?

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

Or

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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