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Should I try to make a dragon?

12:40:35 katy | beetle

actually, this 8th gen grandbaby has the closest stats to my starter yet. she's a AvW instead of ExW though, sadly.

12:39:29 katy | beetle

wild,
i know! i was so shocked. that's why i kept her bloodline going; but none of her pups have had quite as good of stats.

12:38:52 Stalking chat

Katy,
Surprising for a starter wolf, obedient+ExH+ExW

12:37:40 katy | beetle

wild,
the first wolf i posted was my starter alpha female, yeah :)

12:36:18 Stalking chat

advice*

12:36:04 Stalking chat

Katy,
Was that your alpha female?
If so that is crazy

12:34:54 Stalking chat

Katy,
Thanks for the advise!

12:34:31 katy | beetle

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eight gens into the bloodline, i'm just finally starting to use her grandbabies for explore again lol.

12:33:43 Caesar

buying 12 warriors stones felt exactly like taking 12 bullets right in the heart

12:33:24 katy | beetle

wild,
pricing questions generally do better in sales chat

12:33:12 katy | beetle

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there's a reason i keep her bloodline around xD she's just pixels yet i still love her.

12:32:33 Stalking chat

should I lower the price?

12:32:25 Stalking chat

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truly I hope someone breeds to him and not just myself

12:30:11 katy | beetle

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not exactly what i was breeding for, lol

12:28:33 Sith Happens

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There's a reason I kept this guy around for almost 5 RL years

12:23:53 Many moons, one me

I guess the saying is true... Humans will packbond with anything

12:23:23 Caesar

so true, so real >.<

12:20:06 Many moons, one me

Cae
It's funny how attached we get to these pixels, I know I'll cry the day DS catches up to mine

12:07:50 Caesar

two of my trainees are 16?? im gonna cry if they dare kick the bucket tomorrow

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12:41:25 Stalking chat

Should I try to make a dragon?

12:40:35 katy | beetle

actually, this 8th gen grandbaby has the closest stats to my starter yet. she's a AvW instead of ExW though, sadly.

12:39:29 katy | beetle

wild,
i know! i was so shocked. that's why i kept her bloodline going; but none of her pups have had quite as good of stats.

12:38:52 Stalking chat

Katy,
Surprising for a starter wolf, obedient+ExH+ExW

12:37:40 katy | beetle

wild,
the first wolf i posted was my starter alpha female, yeah :)

12:36:18 Stalking chat

advice*

12:36:04 Stalking chat

Katy,
Was that your alpha female?
If so that is crazy

12:34:54 Stalking chat

Katy,
Thanks for the advise!

12:34:31 katy | beetle

-WP Click-
eight gens into the bloodline, i'm just finally starting to use her grandbabies for explore again lol.

12:33:43 Caesar

buying 12 warriors stones felt exactly like taking 12 bullets right in the heart

12:33:24 katy | beetle

wild,
pricing questions generally do better in sales chat

12:33:12 katy | beetle

-WP Click-
there's a reason i keep her bloodline around xD she's just pixels yet i still love her.

12:32:33 Stalking chat

should I lower the price?

12:32:25 Stalking chat

-WP Click-

truly I hope someone breeds to him and not just myself

12:30:11 katy | beetle

-WP Click-
not exactly what i was breeding for, lol

12:28:33 Sith Happens

-WP Click-

There's a reason I kept this guy around for almost 5 RL years

12:23:53 Many moons, one me

I guess the saying is true... Humans will packbond with anything

12:23:23 Caesar

so true, so real >.<

12:20:06 Many moons, one me

Cae
It's funny how attached we get to these pixels, I know I'll cry the day DS catches up to mine

12:07:50 Caesar

two of my trainees are 16?? im gonna cry if they dare kick the bucket tomorrow

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM

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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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