Wolf Play : Galaxy Help

08:38:29 Vash | Xy

Xan
Yeah this side we don't use it I've like never heard of it xD except the use of it overseas

08:33:17 Xan

Vash
i didnt know some people dont have that???

08:31:52 Vash | Xy

I don't blame you we don't have that here but it confuses me xD

I really just need to fix my sleep but that's boring xD

08:29:33 Xan

Vash
i only have to sing for like 30 more mins lol

i get that i swear daylight savings is still messing with me

08:28:10 Vash | Xy

I hope you don't have to sing too long
It's going I'm very tried xD

08:27:01 Xan

Vash
how about you

08:26:54 Xan

Vash
im being forced to sing for school right now and my voice is failing so bad lol

08:26:22 Vash | Xy

Xan
How's it going?

08:25:56 Xan

Vash
Helloooo :DDD

08:25:39 Vash | Xy

Xan :DD

08:24:23 He/They pronouns

Tallula,
Helloo, how are you?

08:24:05 Xan

doodle
thanksss

owl
its hopefully just a cold

Tallula

08:22:57

Ello chat

08:22:12 He/They pronouns

Owl,
Ooo, sounds fun :D

Xanthius,
Aw nooo I hope you get better :(

08:21:43 tiger\Owl|she\her

oh no!!! I don't like it when people sick!!

08:21:13 Xan

Doodle
im doing alright, i think im getting sick

08:21:12 tiger\Owl|she\her

the song is by sam somthing i cant rember and im to lazy to check.

also! i get to do STATIONS today!!! in social studies were doing feudal japan and its gonna be SOOOO fun!!

08:20:11 He/They pronouns

Xanthius,
Hiya, how are you

08:18:43 Xan

hey chat

08:17:51 He/They pronouns

Owl,
Ooo

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08:38:29 Vash | Xy

Xan
Yeah this side we don't use it I've like never heard of it xD except the use of it overseas

08:33:17 Xan

Vash
i didnt know some people dont have that???

08:31:52 Vash | Xy

I don't blame you we don't have that here but it confuses me xD

I really just need to fix my sleep but that's boring xD

08:29:33 Xan

Vash
i only have to sing for like 30 more mins lol

i get that i swear daylight savings is still messing with me

08:28:10 Vash | Xy

I hope you don't have to sing too long
It's going I'm very tried xD

08:27:01 Xan

Vash
how about you

08:26:54 Xan

Vash
im being forced to sing for school right now and my voice is failing so bad lol

08:26:22 Vash | Xy

Xan
How's it going?

08:25:56 Xan

Vash
Helloooo :DDD

08:25:39 Vash | Xy

Xan :DD

08:24:23 He/They pronouns

Tallula,
Helloo, how are you?

08:24:05 Xan

doodle
thanksss

owl
its hopefully just a cold

Tallula

08:22:57

Ello chat

08:22:12 He/They pronouns

Owl,
Ooo, sounds fun :D

Xanthius,
Aw nooo I hope you get better :(

08:21:43 tiger\Owl|she\her

oh no!!! I don't like it when people sick!!

08:21:13 Xan

Doodle
im doing alright, i think im getting sick

08:21:12 tiger\Owl|she\her

the song is by sam somthing i cant rember and im to lazy to check.

also! i get to do STATIONS today!!! in social studies were doing feudal japan and its gonna be SOOOO fun!!

08:20:11 He/They pronouns

Xanthius,
Hiya, how are you

08:18:43 Xan

hey chat

08:17:51 He/They pronouns

Owl,
Ooo

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April 16, 2018 09:07 PM

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Here's the image

https://s14.postimg.cc/4h7dmgk29/Random_Galaxy.png

For some reason, something's been really bothering me about this picture and I can't seem to figure out what.

All critiques are appreciated, or just tell me what you wish was changed

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 09:12 PM

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Maybe more stars? We don't really see them

Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

April 16, 2018 09:37 PM

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DarkCloudClan said:
Maybe more stars? We don't really see them
Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

Alright, lemme spam the stars and update the picture XD

Edit: UPDATED

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 11:31 PM

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Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

April 16, 2018 11:53 PM

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a m b e r said:
Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

XD Thanks, let me update it again