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Khaos
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come back after hiatus with no mushrooms or apples and elderly wolves :')
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xD Now it's dark.
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Khaos
i despise light mode. the palette is beautiful though :o its like a fuzzy dream
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khaos
i got flashbanged even with the warning
i like it! maybe you could add some more colour
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Owlstar-
To find the Palette Art section in the forums, select Gathering < Forums < Palette Art (under the Artwork category)
 Tartarus
12:27:55 Husky
Khaos
God thats bright. I love it tho!
 Kháos
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Thoughts on this palette? (Warning since y'all got flashbanged last time: light mode)
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waterfall
im gonna drink the rubby duck hand sanitizer tm if you dont
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buggy
where do I find that??
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Owl
check the palette art forum! Theres always shops open and sometimes people have free ones
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can some one please give me motivation for naming wolves sorting thme doing the new contests, and more.... Please I need motivationXD
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anyone making palettes?? or have some?
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I need one more paw :0
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-WP Click- this position or alpha female?
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I finally got gaelic blood wolf:,)
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 Tartarus
12:31:59 Husky
Khaos
Oooo I love the dark mode so much!
 Valkyriee
12:31:41 Valk, (She/Her)
Apples: 0
Apples Saved: 0
Mushrooms: 15
Mushrooms Saved: 0

come back after hiatus with no mushrooms or apples and elderly wolves :')
 Kháos
12:31:08 Kaos || Kháos
xD Now it's dark.
 snake
12:29:06 
Khaos
i despise light mode. the palette is beautiful though :o its like a fuzzy dream
 Vax
12:28:42 a rock in your shoe
khaos
i got flashbanged even with the warning
i like it! maybe you could add some more colour
 Owlstar
12:28:35 tiger\Owl|she\her
daaaaaaam that's bright!! and thanks!!
 BrightenCove
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Holy shit...
 Kháos
12:28:09 Kaos || Kháos
Owlstar-
To find the Palette Art section in the forums, select Gathering < Forums < Palette Art (under the Artwork category)
 Tartarus
12:27:55 Husky
Khaos
God thats bright. I love it tho!
 Kháos
12:27:26 Kaos || Kháos
Thoughts on this palette? (Warning since y'all got flashbanged last time: light mode)
 Vax
12:26:07 a rock in your shoe
waterfall
im gonna drink the rubby duck hand sanitizer tm if you dont
 Owlstar
12:25:34 tiger\Owl|she\her
buggy
where do I find that??
 BuggyOs
12:24:45 Lucky Ladybug
Owl
check the palette art forum! Theres always shops open and sometimes people have free ones
 Imladris
12:24:11 
Serpents, as Nike says, Just Do It x')
 Serpents
12:22:57 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
can some one please give me motivation for naming wolves sorting thme doing the new contests, and more.... Please I need motivationXD
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anyone making palettes?? or have some?
 Collar
12:19:47 Altar 🦌
I need one more paw :0
 Owlstar
12:18:47 tiger\Owl|she\her
-WP Click- this position or alpha female?
 PhoenixClan
12:17:37 Phoenix~
I finally got gaelic blood wolf:,)
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Help me/CritiqueJune 28, 2018 04:27 PM


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Something isn't settling well with me and this image... Could you guys help?

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Help me/CritiqueJune 29, 2018 08:42 PM


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You did a very good job, but I can see a few things that could be touched up on.

The cat's chest is facing us, but the entirety of it's side is visible. It's back wouldn't be able to twist like this so we should either see only part of the chest, or part of the side and back.

If you chose to keep the back instead of the front-facing chest, I would add a little more exaggeration to the back and maybe lose, or change, some of the fur detail. With cats, the elegant curve of the back is very noticeable.

If you decided to keep the front-facing chest, the back and hind legs would be behind it, though the curve would still be visible, of course.

The legs themselves are a little lumpy, compared to the graceful lines a cat has. The heels should be lower, and at a less extreme angle, while the knees would have a slightly shallower curve that blends gracefully into the body. The hindquarters could be rounder, and shorter to show where the hip bones are.

I've never been great with front-facing legs, but cats have slightly thicker, short forearms, usually. There might not be as deep a dip from shoulder to neck, and the most noticeable joint from the front of the leg would be the wrist curving slightly sloping outwards, thickening before becoming the paw.

The ears could be less rounded, though of course it depends on the breed or OC you were drawing. Cat ears are most often triangular, and I would set them a little higher up on the head while lengthening the cheeks. Cats have slightly round heads.

I would make the tail tuft thick and blend it into the tail more, rather than a separate piece of fur, but that one is more a personal preference.

I would love to draw little bits to visually represent my advice, but my tablet's too scratched up to pick up my pen, apparently. '-_- If I get it working again soon, I'll add some pics.

Edited at June 29, 2018 08:43 PM by The Watch

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