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 Eye of Eternity
09:03:46 tern | they/he
owlstar
is he supposed to be an established species from kotlc? as far as i can remember theres humans, elves, goblins, and various animals,,
 Owlstar
09:02:50 tiger\Owl|she\her
I'm tired I would but I should be alseep
 Serpents
09:02:21 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
anyone up for a rp or chat pm me I'm bored
 Owlstar
09:01:33 tiger\Owl|she\her
-WP Click- here sorry running on "emergency energy reserves"
 Eye of Eternity
08:59:55 tern | they/he
owlstar
kotlc mention.....
can you resend the link? it doesnt work and my memory is hazy
 Faulty Demons
08:59:53 Ollie, Gold
Gaze
Oh, thanks!
 Owlstar
08:58:07 tiger\Owl|she\her
its for keeper of the lost cities I'm going for slightly dark but pretty. he's gonna be my OCS mate. don't question. I wanted him to be a lil bit wildish too
 Eye of Eternity
08:57:03 tern | they/he
'tim the killer' just dealt me psychic damage get me out of here
 Eye of Eternity
08:56:06 tern | they/he
owlstar
depends on what kind of world/role you're going for, honestly
 Eye of Eternity
08:55:37 tern | they/he
ollie
the far back thigh looks a little thick? otherwise it looks awesome :0
 Owlstar
08:55:33 tiger\Owl|she\her

-WP Click- how do you all like this pelt idea for a male wolf In something? I have ha freehand base ready for him. can yall please respond. i want to know if he needs editing
 Eye of Eternity
08:54:33 tern | they/he
eer
its pretty fun and very very stressful when its not fun
i do too :3 theyre so fun

alright goodnight for whenever you head out ^^
 Faulty Demons
08:53:51 Ollie, Gold
Thoughts on this sketch? Anything look off?
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 Enthralled Poet
08:53:12 Asteroid, Poet
ever
lolll i usually use ice if its really bad
 EvergreenHills
08:52:44 Juicy Arm Boy
Asteroid
Awh that’s stupid. I’d rather have no blood in my foot than itchy ankles
 EvergreenHills
08:52:09 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
Ooh walk sounds nice :D
Okay LOL
 Eye of Eternity
08:51:59 tern | they/he
petri
ill do it !! itll just take like three years /silly

goodnightt ^^
 Enthralled Poet
08:51:47 Asteroid, Poet
Ever
yeah its because blood flow is returning
 EvergreenHills
08:51:45 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
Ooh fun :0 I’ve never actually worked on a play before but I love watching them <3

I’m gonna head out soon ;-; getting really sleepy haha
 Eye of Eternity
08:51:21 tern | they/he
eer
ooh drawing is always good though
if youve got nothing else planned going for a walk might be nice? the weathers so good now
oooh :00 if you do that ill snatch up your comms :3 (if i remember)

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 Eye of Eternity
09:03:46 tern | they/he
owlstar
is he supposed to be an established species from kotlc? as far as i can remember theres humans, elves, goblins, and various animals,,
 Owlstar
09:02:50 tiger\Owl|she\her
I'm tired I would but I should be alseep
 Serpents
09:02:21 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
anyone up for a rp or chat pm me I'm bored
 Owlstar
09:01:33 tiger\Owl|she\her
-WP Click- here sorry running on "emergency energy reserves"
 Eye of Eternity
08:59:55 tern | they/he
owlstar
kotlc mention.....
can you resend the link? it doesnt work and my memory is hazy
 Faulty Demons
08:59:53 Ollie, Gold
Gaze
Oh, thanks!
 Owlstar
08:58:07 tiger\Owl|she\her
its for keeper of the lost cities I'm going for slightly dark but pretty. he's gonna be my OCS mate. don't question. I wanted him to be a lil bit wildish too
 Eye of Eternity
08:57:03 tern | they/he
'tim the killer' just dealt me psychic damage get me out of here
 Eye of Eternity
08:56:06 tern | they/he
owlstar
depends on what kind of world/role you're going for, honestly
 Eye of Eternity
08:55:37 tern | they/he
ollie
the far back thigh looks a little thick? otherwise it looks awesome :0
 Owlstar
08:55:33 tiger\Owl|she\her

-WP Click- how do you all like this pelt idea for a male wolf In something? I have ha freehand base ready for him. can yall please respond. i want to know if he needs editing
 Eye of Eternity
08:54:33 tern | they/he
eer
its pretty fun and very very stressful when its not fun
i do too :3 theyre so fun

alright goodnight for whenever you head out ^^
 Faulty Demons
08:53:51 Ollie, Gold
Thoughts on this sketch? Anything look off?
-Click-
 Enthralled Poet
08:53:12 Asteroid, Poet
ever
lolll i usually use ice if its really bad
 EvergreenHills
08:52:44 Juicy Arm Boy
Asteroid
Awh that’s stupid. I’d rather have no blood in my foot than itchy ankles
 EvergreenHills
08:52:09 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
Ooh walk sounds nice :D
Okay LOL
 Eye of Eternity
08:51:59 tern | they/he
petri
ill do it !! itll just take like three years /silly

goodnightt ^^
 Enthralled Poet
08:51:47 Asteroid, Poet
Ever
yeah its because blood flow is returning
 EvergreenHills
08:51:45 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
Ooh fun :0 I’ve never actually worked on a play before but I love watching them <3

I’m gonna head out soon ;-; getting really sleepy haha
 Eye of Eternity
08:51:21 tern | they/he
eer
ooh drawing is always good though
if youve got nothing else planned going for a walk might be nice? the weathers so good now
oooh :00 if you do that ill snatch up your comms :3 (if i remember)




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Critique me!May 15, 2022 07:29 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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I have no clue what I'm doing. Gallery Link

A few hours ago I was bored and decided to become an artist with no previous experience. With that being said this is my attempt to draw an OC of mine and I would like feedback. The anatomy seems a bit funky, he is supposed to be a wolf. I also colored him. For those of you that want to, you can go over and red line stuff so I can see what to fix! If you have tips on blending and colors that would be appreciated as well. I draw using Adobe Fresco, but if there are other good apps to use, let me know.

I'll link minor stuff and put the images for more important stuff so this isn't too long. Thanks :)

OC for reference(yes the oc is mine)

All image credit from here down belongs to me.

First red line

IMG-1638.jpg

First red line and outline

Altered final outline (I have no idea how I changed it this much)

IMG-1637.jpg

Colored final product

IMG-1636.jpg

Colored final product with OG lines behind it (for comparison, also I forgot to screenshot the red line that's under it. That one is in fact the original, the first red line linked at the top is the second red line I did in order to fix this. If that makes sense.)


Edited at May 17, 2022 07:49 PM by Ciao
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:21 PM


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hello! very cute character youve got there!!

ive been drawing canines/wolves in particular for going on 6(ish) years now id say, and ive learned a lot about drawing them over the years, so im here to offer a few tips (as well as some blue lines for future reference)!

so canine anatomy is very hard to explain, but the way i improved is by studying the canine body by tracing over actual photos of wolves i found online. ive found simplifying their bodies and more specifically their limbs into simple shapes and refinining from there helps a ton for anatomy improvement!

ive bluelined over your image and focused on a few different things, and ill list the links to view them below!

these are just a few quick base sketches i whipped up within like 5 minutes so theyre not perfect, but i hope theyre able to help a bit!

you have a lot of potential and im so excited to see your improvement!! if you need anything at all dont be scared to reach out to me and ill try my best to help! :)


Edited at May 15, 2022 08:26 PM by jaune
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:53 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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Thank you for the help! I can definitely see how I can improve the design more, and the blue line especially helped. For the anatomy I think tracing a real wolf would really help as well. I appreciate your critique and i'll definitely reach out if I have more questions :)
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:07 PM


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Ah- I might be of assistance here. Anatomy is quite off, /lighthearted
If I forget to add the redlines pm me I get busy lol
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:48 PM


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Thanks, i'll pm you^^

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