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11:32:28 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

im bored anyone up for an rp pmme

11:27:05 Demon/Soul

Pink Kitty
Haha I remember those days :') if it makes you feel better if I mass breeding now I can in fact lose pups I recently broke my record of no pups lost so imma take a game year off breeding

serene.

11:27:02 ✧ ren

helloo

Sowelu

11:24:05

I have a song for the wolf play folks. Anyone like Marshmello?

Pink kitty🐈

11:17:30 Kneecap stealer

But I ain't helping myself but continue to breed my females when they can breed (the poor version of mass breeding) and breed them minutes apart so they don't all pop at the same time

Pink kitty🐈

11:14:57 Kneecap stealer

But right now my stud and battler is in boarding while my wolves are pregnant XD

Pink kitty🐈

11:13:31 Kneecap stealer

I only got a single full grown stud and I'm keeping him

Demon Souls

11:13:15 Demon/Soul

Katy
If it makes you feel better I have 39 wolves eligible for DS right now and I lost 14 on Monday... I dont wanna know how many are eligible come tomorrow when everyone ages again

distant-lands

11:04:23 katy | beetle

-WP Click-
all my studs are dying on me :c

Wilverbeast

11:02:08 Will

@Kitty

LMAOO
Thank you for the offer X"D

Pink kitty🐈

11:00:46 Kneecap stealer

I got three bags of donuts, if only you were around here I'd give you some donuts

Wilverbeast

10:59:37 Will

Hiya Apo ^-^

Wilverbeast

10:59:28 Will

Craving late night presentation crunch yummies...
What to get...

Apothecary

10:50:02 Medicinally Autistic

I'm so tired, but I finally got my new laptop charger, so I'll have the energy to explore again. I'll have to build all new teams though.

Boeing

10:49:55 Boe

Hey Apo :D

Apothecary

10:49:04 Medicinally Autistic

Hello all :)

Pink kitty🐈

10:48:05 Kneecap stealer

Dont you just love when your dog leaves you a generous gift of a pile of shit

Boeing

10:43:13 Boe

Wait apples are 1900 now? o.o

Pink kitty🐈

10:42:33 Kneecap stealer

1900 for an apple so 1900+1900=?

Demon Souls

10:42:23 Demon/Soul

Not the mass retire button being broken 😭

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11:32:28 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

im bored anyone up for an rp pmme

Demon Souls

11:27:05 Demon/Soul

Pink Kitty
Haha I remember those days :') if it makes you feel better if I mass breeding now I can in fact lose pups I recently broke my record of no pups lost so imma take a game year off breeding

serene.

11:27:02 ✧ ren

helloo

Sowelu

11:24:05

I have a song for the wolf play folks. Anyone like Marshmello?

Pink kitty🐈

11:17:30 Kneecap stealer

But I ain't helping myself but continue to breed my females when they can breed (the poor version of mass breeding) and breed them minutes apart so they don't all pop at the same time

Pink kitty🐈

11:14:57 Kneecap stealer

But right now my stud and battler is in boarding while my wolves are pregnant XD

Pink kitty🐈

11:13:31 Kneecap stealer

I only got a single full grown stud and I'm keeping him

Demon Souls

11:13:15 Demon/Soul

Katy
If it makes you feel better I have 39 wolves eligible for DS right now and I lost 14 on Monday... I dont wanna know how many are eligible come tomorrow when everyone ages again

distant-lands

11:04:23 katy | beetle

-WP Click-
all my studs are dying on me :c

Wilverbeast

11:02:08 Will

@Kitty

LMAOO
Thank you for the offer X"D

Pink kitty🐈

11:00:46 Kneecap stealer

I got three bags of donuts, if only you were around here I'd give you some donuts

Wilverbeast

10:59:37 Will

Hiya Apo ^-^

Wilverbeast

10:59:28 Will

Craving late night presentation crunch yummies...
What to get...

Apothecary

10:50:02 Medicinally Autistic

I'm so tired, but I finally got my new laptop charger, so I'll have the energy to explore again. I'll have to build all new teams though.

Boeing

10:49:55 Boe

Hey Apo :D

Apothecary

10:49:04 Medicinally Autistic

Hello all :)

Pink kitty🐈

10:48:05 Kneecap stealer

Dont you just love when your dog leaves you a generous gift of a pile of shit

Boeing

10:43:13 Boe

Wait apples are 1900 now? o.o

Pink kitty🐈

10:42:33 Kneecap stealer

1900 for an apple so 1900+1900=?

Demon Souls

10:42:23 Demon/Soul

Not the mass retire button being broken 😭

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Critique?

July 6, 2018 02:35 AM

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Just trying out some semi-realistic fur practice

Critiques on lighting, blending, etc. are greatly appreciated. If you have suggestions on how to make it look more realistic, that's also greatly appreciated

https://s33.postimg.cc/6dgalc133/Fur_Practice.png

Critique?

July 7, 2018 05:36 PM

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So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!

Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows

I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color

Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

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July 7, 2018 05:51 PM

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Dragon's Fire said:
So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!
Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows
I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color
Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

I agree with both! For fur, I personally think that the most important thing is edge variation. Have very stark contrast as well, as right now, you have a lot of softer edges.

For color, instead of shading with black and white, try changing your hue variation! For wolves with white fur, try blue-tinted gray, cream, anything. For wolves with cream fur, try shading with a reddish-brown. Of course, these are only like two in a billion examples lol

Another thing I think is important with fur is fur direction. Look at real wolves and see how their fur grows in like ten different directions.

These are only my personal observations on drawing fur. I like what you have going so far, you can do it!

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July 7, 2018 08:12 PM

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Honestly I have no critique but this is awesome.On a real animal I think the color would be a little more varied though but I under stand you might have not added it because of it being practice.

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July 7, 2018 10:18 PM

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x3 I haven't tried putting colored edges on a practice, I might just do that. Thanks guys >^<

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