hit me with your worst. i'm going to do another painfully long YCH to make some mush/apples - which i will probably spend on something unimportant later on.

but besides my rambling, i need some helpful critics to judge this sketch before i go over with more clean lines.

critic away ;]

(updated version below this post)

you might need to zoom in a little, sorry. it's a bit big 🙈

Looks real good!

Maybe point his snout up a bit? And make his eye a bit higher?

The back to hind legs should be flatter. Kinda a straight line

the only issue im seeing is the back legs look like they're floating in the air they look really stiff but other then that it looks good

updated version:

Could I try to redline?

of course ^^

Hope you don't mind if I tried a quick redline too!! I love the lineart style.

This is just like,, a quick skeleton breakdown! So I've not added on any floof

I think the eye could do with being just a lil bit higher. The front legs look great, but in comparison the back legs look quite long, especially considering how high up the back comes! :0

Edit: Added floof version as I can see how the back legs on my redline might look a lil confusing