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11:39:42

You’re okay. I love you. c:

11:39:26 Altar 🦌

:"|

11:38:59

Eheh. :]

11:36:32 Kneecap stealer

Rat

I have no idea
All I know is sacrifice came into chat

11:34:28

Weaksauce aches, you say?

11:34:10 Altar 🦌

Ow ow ow

11:34:06 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

What the fuck did I just come into!?

11:33:57 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Whenever someone talks to me for more than like 3 minutes, I go a bit crazy. I dont need my professor to explain how to use Microsoft Word

11:29:03 Kneecap stealer

Or a skinwalker

11:27:09 Altar 🦌

Maybe more like a feral dog??? Lol
Weaksauce aches to be honest, im strong

11:26:22

Collar, maybe it was a bear…

11:26:00 Kneecap stealer

Damn😂😂😂😂

11:25:58 Altar 🦌

Brah

11:25:44

Yap yap yap

11:25:43 Altar 🦌

Ow my shoulders hurt and for what. Its like i got mauled??? Maybe in just old

11:21:15 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

XD

11:20:22 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Yeah im screentime maxxing

11:19:02 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Andy
Lol sometimes you just need to let your little kid out

11:17:09 Andy/Kait [he/they]

I feel like im 5 years old. Watching youtube on my tablet and playing a game on my phone😭

11:12:44 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Andy
Yeah their Devil spawns but their too cute to hate them lol

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11:39:42

You’re okay. I love you. c:

11:39:26 Altar 🦌

:"|

11:38:59

Eheh. :]

11:36:32 Kneecap stealer

Rat

I have no idea
All I know is sacrifice came into chat

11:34:28

Weaksauce aches, you say?

11:34:10 Altar 🦌

Ow ow ow

11:34:06 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

What the fuck did I just come into!?

11:33:57 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Whenever someone talks to me for more than like 3 minutes, I go a bit crazy. I dont need my professor to explain how to use Microsoft Word

11:29:03 Kneecap stealer

Or a skinwalker

11:27:09 Altar 🦌

Maybe more like a feral dog??? Lol
Weaksauce aches to be honest, im strong

11:26:22

Collar, maybe it was a bear…

11:26:00 Kneecap stealer

Damn😂😂😂😂

11:25:58 Altar 🦌

Brah

11:25:44

Yap yap yap

11:25:43 Altar 🦌

Ow my shoulders hurt and for what. Its like i got mauled??? Maybe in just old

11:21:15 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

XD

11:20:22 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Yeah im screentime maxxing

11:19:02 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Andy
Lol sometimes you just need to let your little kid out

11:17:09 Andy/Kait [he/they]

I feel like im 5 years old. Watching youtube on my tablet and playing a game on my phone😭

11:12:44 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Andy
Yeah their Devil spawns but their too cute to hate them lol

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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#753472
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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM

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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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