Wolf Play : Criticism Needed

07:24:34 NRC/Raven

I have a loreal Paris nail polish....

07:23:03 Pixie, Vul | ♈

One of the best things I did for myself is protected my own happiness first.

Articularis genus

07:22:50 Zeppelin

wassuuup

07:22:12 Pixie, Vul | ♈

Sky
Just because she's related doesn't mean you have to have a relationship with her. Blood means nothing if you don't know her. I have an older sister who I knew very briefly and I barely ever talk to her, and it's never bothered me. Sometimes I don't even count her when people ask me how many siblings I have

Moonfall

07:21:14 Many moons, one me

Vul
I'm not even the intended target and that hits

07:18:25 P'Sky/Sky-kun

Vul

Thank you,
Im just not interested in connecting with a total stranger who lives so far away.
He calls her my sister and I just responded with a by blood only

07:18:14 NRC/Raven

I have sooo many nail polishes ahhh and most of its old stuff

07:16:56 NRC/Raven

Now I'm just looking in my nail polish bin to see what matches lol

07:16:51 renee

I'm not that good at painting my nails (never looks good) so press ons are easier for me

07:16:47 Pixie, Vul | ♈

Sky

I mean I think you don't need to have a relationship with a total stranger if you don't want to. It's not your job to make sure everyone is happy, you should protect your own happiness first.

07:15:59 NRC/Raven

My mom never let me wear press on's as a kid so I've always done polish

07:15:39 tiger\Owl|she\her

I prefer painting them myself

07:15:38 Pixie, Vul | ♈

Aria

It's Sally Hansen, it's the color Swirling Sunflower from their Flower Power line. I found it at Walmart. It's a nice pale yellow

07:15:16 tiger\Owl|she\her

I can’t do press onsc

07:15:07 P'Sky/Sky-kun

Any advice would be much appreciated

07:15:02 NRC/Raven

I've never worn press on nails in my life

07:14:31 renee

I'm a press on girly

07:14:18 NRC/Raven

I have gel miracle nail polish from Sally Hansen hits that's all the gel I got ( that doesn't need a lamp)

07:14:17 tiger\Owl|she\her

I want to make my nails look like something I would do but also the silver for therians

07:14:04 P'Sky/Sky-kun

Im conflicted
Im an adult not a new one 🤣🤣
I just found out recently that I have an older sister I've never met, neither has my dad.
He wants me to have a relationship with her but I'm not really interested, hes upset by it.
In my head I'm sorry you're upset but I don't know what you want me to tell you.

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07:24:34 NRC/Raven

I have a loreal Paris nail polish....

07:23:03 Pixie, Vul | ♈

One of the best things I did for myself is protected my own happiness first.

Articularis genus

07:22:50 Zeppelin

wassuuup

07:22:12 Pixie, Vul | ♈

Moonfall

07:21:14 Many moons, one me

Vul
I'm not even the intended target and that hits

07:18:25 P'Sky/Sky-kun

Vul

Thank you,
Im just not interested in connecting with a total stranger who lives so far away.
He calls her my sister and I just responded with a by blood only

07:18:14 NRC/Raven

I have sooo many nail polishes ahhh and most of its old stuff

07:16:56 NRC/Raven

Now I'm just looking in my nail polish bin to see what matches lol

07:16:51 renee

I'm not that good at painting my nails (never looks good) so press ons are easier for me

07:16:47 Pixie, Vul | ♈

Sky

I mean I think you don't need to have a relationship with a total stranger if you don't want to. It's not your job to make sure everyone is happy, you should protect your own happiness first.

07:15:59 NRC/Raven

My mom never let me wear press on's as a kid so I've always done polish

07:15:39 tiger\Owl|she\her

I prefer painting them myself

07:15:38 Pixie, Vul | ♈

Aria

It's Sally Hansen, it's the color Swirling Sunflower from their Flower Power line. I found it at Walmart. It's a nice pale yellow

07:15:16 tiger\Owl|she\her

I can’t do press onsc

07:15:07 P'Sky/Sky-kun

Any advice would be much appreciated

07:15:02 NRC/Raven

I've never worn press on nails in my life

07:14:31 renee

I'm a press on girly

07:14:18 NRC/Raven

I have gel miracle nail polish from Sally Hansen hits that's all the gel I got ( that doesn't need a lamp)

07:14:17 tiger\Owl|she\her

I want to make my nails look like something I would do but also the silver for therians

07:14:04 P'Sky/Sky-kun

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November 9, 2017 10:25 PM

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https://s2.postimg.org/cm6tysat5/Screen_Shot_2017-11-09_at_11.21.15_PM.png

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Edited at November 9, 2017 10:28 PM by Aphmau clan

November 9, 2017 10:28 PM

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Not bad (\^-^/)

November 9, 2017 10:29 PM

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It's not really that bad in all honesty.

The tail and maybe the front leg on the side we're viewing could use a little work maybe, though the tail could actually depend on the breed of cat the drawing is of.

But overall it's pretty good

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:30 PM by Destinations End

November 10, 2017 01:28 AM

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The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:

https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:

January 1, 2018 09:11 PM

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Siarczek said:
The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:

This helps me out! Thank you

January 3, 2018 03:49 AM