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Any fun plane for the weekend ?
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Okay :D
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 EvergreenHills
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 EvergreenHills
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Cloud
Any fun plane for the weekend ?
 EvergreenHills
10:57:34 Juicy Arm Boy
Cloud
Okay :D
Thats good <3 im well :3 drawing a little bit right now lol
 Nekros
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-WP Click-

RP anybody?
 Sleep
10:56:28 Kneecap stealer
14/250 eggs
 Ezranian
10:55:39 ezra, he/him
vul-
wow, gross! i should try that some time lol
 Vulpixles
10:54:55 Pixie, Vul | ♈
The amount of lint and dog hair I just dug out of my charger port on my phone is disgusting. No wonder it had such a hard time staying plugged in
 cloudpack
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and im good how about you
 cloudpack
10:53:13 cloud (he/they)
uncle

im a trans male so i would be your nephew i am ocean and juno's son
 EvergreenHills
10:51:00 Juicy Arm Boy
Cloud
Are you my neice or nephew :>
Anyways, how are youu ?
 Sleep
10:50:43 Kneecap stealer
It's border spring petals #2 the pink pansy tail and leg wraps as well as ear flower
 Ezranian
10:49:10 ezra, he/him
man why does the donkey in a vest do So Much Damage
 Eye of Eternity
10:48:30 tern | they/he
oooh i forgot i wanted to hasturpost... its too late now ill do it tomorrow
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10:48:22 cloud (he/they)
uncle

yah i checked that out earlier
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Oh hes offline :>
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Brotherrr
Hiii
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The tail ribbons are super cute
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Trying to get the pink stuff in the egg shop for orchid petal
 Sleep
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10/250 eggs
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Critique?August 24, 2018 04:29 PM


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Heyo! I'm looking for some critique on this. It's a gift and I feel it's really off. Thanks!
https://s26.postimg.cc/wklv0qk7b/BCBE6_B40-6_C2_C-4710-840_E-525226233_B98.png?dl=1
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:40 PM


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It's so cute :0
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:47 PM


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Thanks!
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:47 PM


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Maybe put the frosting in front of the hedgehog, make it more centered-looking? It's a really great piece. Be proud!
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:49 PM


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TheAlphaPack said:
Maybe put the frosting in front of the hedgehog, make it more centered-looking? It's a really great piece. Be proud!

Ooh good idea, thanks!
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:49 PM


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It looks cute, my critique would be maybe make the cupcake cups bottom a little rounder ( more 3D ish ) and bring the topping to the foreground so it’s in front of it unless it supposed to be on the other side

That’s it I hoped I helped
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:51 PM


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starwolfs said:
It looks cute, my critique would be maybe make the cupcake cups bottom a little rounder ( more 3D ish ) and bring the topping to the foreground so it’s in front of it unless it supposed to be on the other side

That’s it I hoped I helped


You definitely did, thanks!
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:58 PM


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That's beautiful! And really cute :D
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:58 PM


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The frosting and the cherry seem to be layered pretty weirdly? Maybe try to make them look like they're each sitting on top of the other rather than behind it. ^^ I absolutely adore how you did the hedgehog though! :'D
Critique?August 24, 2018 05:01 PM


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The bottom half almost looks like it's in front of the quills on the top. Maybe make the quills that overlap the lighter half of the porcupine a bit longer, so that it's clear that the front half isn't sticking out in a way.

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