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01:26:58 Axan hoarder

All pups from 1 female will be born at the same time

01:26:46 Kneecap stealer

....I...have no clue,vpop her with a feather is all I can say

A bonsaitreasure

01:24:58

if a wolf is in labour will pups borns each hour of is it eah 15 minutes?

01:22:00 Moony

yeah. I'm now saving up to buy a fertility figurine so she can have her pups now XD

01:21:16

Moon

That’s sad 😞

01:19:13 Moony

Just gotta hope my girl will live for 5 more days...

01:18:46 Moony

there's a Monday death script?!?!?! dear me I never knew that

St. Cloverbeast

01:17:03 Will

They can.
That's why people breed on specific days do pups are born before Monday death script

01:16:36 Moony

At least I hope they can't.....

01:16:23 Moony

I'm so confused XD

St. Cloverbeast

01:15:29 Will

Yes they can

01:15:16 Kneecap stealer

I don't think they can die while pregnant

01:13:33 Moony

I just bred my 15yo female wolf to my other 15yo male and I'm just hoping she doesn't die before having her pups 🤞🤞

St. Cloverbeast

01:13:06 Will

...
-WP Click-

>->

Thank you? I guess??

12:56:10

WHAT DOSE THE FOX SAY ming ming ming ming

Save me

12:51:00

got 2nd place in a mini game :D

12:38:38 Carpal Tunnel

Yay, my headache is finally going away.

12:24:28 Kneecap stealer

Seriously?

Damn,ok let me worry about it

12:23:49 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

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12:22:55 Cervo

this fmc is going too absoloutly destroy me I can already tell

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01:26:58 Axan hoarder

All pups from 1 female will be born at the same time

01:26:46 Kneecap stealer

....I...have no clue,vpop her with a feather is all I can say

A bonsaitreasure

01:24:58

if a wolf is in labour will pups borns each hour of is it eah 15 minutes?

01:22:00 Moony

yeah. I'm now saving up to buy a fertility figurine so she can have her pups now XD

01:21:16

Moon

That’s sad 😞

01:19:13 Moony

Just gotta hope my girl will live for 5 more days...

01:18:46 Moony

there's a Monday death script?!?!?! dear me I never knew that

St. Cloverbeast

01:17:03 Will

They can.
That's why people breed on specific days do pups are born before Monday death script

01:16:36 Moony

At least I hope they can't.....

01:16:23 Moony

I'm so confused XD

St. Cloverbeast

01:15:29 Will

Yes they can

01:15:16 Kneecap stealer

I don't think they can die while pregnant

01:13:33 Moony

I just bred my 15yo female wolf to my other 15yo male and I'm just hoping she doesn't die before having her pups 🤞🤞

St. Cloverbeast

01:13:06 Will

...
-WP Click-

>->

Thank you? I guess??

12:56:10

WHAT DOSE THE FOX SAY ming ming ming ming

Save me

12:51:00

got 2nd place in a mini game :D

12:38:38 Carpal Tunnel

Yay, my headache is finally going away.

12:24:28 Kneecap stealer

Seriously?

Damn,ok let me worry about it

12:23:49 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

4ever
0

12:22:55 Cervo

this fmc is going too absoloutly destroy me I can already tell

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

Or

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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