Critique on this please?
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Summer Month: 1 
Day 
Light Rain | Chatbox |
| SunGaze |
| Doodle, Yeah and I hate you! /silly /nsrs But that is valid. I mean I hate drawing eyes so I can understand that. |
| Wild Runners |
| I might save up some and buy some apples to get some high talent puppies from Hel |
| Master Darkfire |
| i may not be online tonight :( because of life and my parents. |
| Doodle Dragon |
| Sungaze, I HATE doors, they're so weird to draw ToT Starlight, Hiya :3 Wild, Real |
| Wild Runners |
| atleast I got a few females giving birth tomorrow so I can see some puppies |
| Moonfall |
| Wild, mood. I love people, but after about 10 minutes... Just lemme go home I'm losing braincells |
| Wild Runners |
| Doodle balloon, Some people just piss me off like, why the hell are you so dumb? (Not you) |
| LIFC_Official |
| -WP Click- Welcome to LIFC we are now looking for Butterflies! Do you what it takes to enter the garden? Are you a missing piece of The Spectrum? |
| Quests |
| Alliance Battles |
| Challenges |
 | Wolverine : 0 |
| Coyote : +3 |
| Bobcat : +1 |
| Chatbox |
| SunGaze |
| Doodle, Yeah and I hate you! /silly /nsrs But that is valid. I mean I hate drawing eyes so I can understand that. |
| Wild Runners |
| I might save up some and buy some apples to get some high talent puppies from Hel |
| Master Darkfire |
| i may not be online tonight :( because of life and my parents. |
| Doodle Dragon |
| Sungaze, I HATE doors, they're so weird to draw ToT Starlight, Hiya :3 Wild, Real |
| Wild Runners |
| atleast I got a few females giving birth tomorrow so I can see some puppies |
| Moonfall |
| Wild, mood. I love people, but after about 10 minutes... Just lemme go home I'm losing braincells |
| Wild Runners |
| Doodle balloon, Some people just piss me off like, why the hell are you so dumb? (Not you) |
| LIFC_Official |
| -WP Click- Welcome to LIFC we are now looking for Butterflies! Do you what it takes to enter the garden? Are you a missing piece of The Spectrum? |
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