Wolf Play : Constructive Criticism

09:29:08 Dark/fire/ice

-WP Click- He been good boy today. He need a paws :3

09:27:39 He/They pronouns

Paws?

-WP Click-

Schadenfreude

09:25:05 Clex Rules

One thing about satellite ear dogs is that they react and bark at literally EVERYTHING. Even a leaf falling outside makes my dog bark like he's ready for battle.

09:25:04 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

-WP Click- should I give her and her sister the same surname as Kyrian as the share a mother?

Ezranian

09:18:48 ezra, he/him

oh it's still happening

09:13:41 Dark/fire/ice

-WP Click- 🥔

09:12:49 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

did not think it would be that long.....

09:12:29 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone up for an rp pm me please im bored
if anyone has ideas for ocs pm me I heed help with some,
or shifter/hybrid forms for some
(ex for one its mostly how should the left eye look as I want a kinda ghostly aura look to the left side
for the other hair style and stuff

also what power sonds cool for a oc(a Kitsune+ estern dragon+Phoenix ) Ash
Glass
Magma
or other(please give me ideas again pm me

09:12:17 Dark/fire/ice

Agreed

09:09:12 He/They pronouns

Chat is super sleepy right now

LIFC_Official

08:39:49 Life In Full Color

-WP Click-
Welcome to LIFC
we are now looking for Butterflies!
Do you what it takes to enter the garden?
Are you a missing piece of The Spectrum?

08:21:40 He/They pronouns

Melody,
Lol, it was a good choice

08:19:34 Mel (he/they)

doodle

thank you! I've had my eye on that dye for a while now so I splurged haha.

08:18:33 He/They pronouns

Melody,
Woah- She's beautiful :o

Ever,
Lol

08:17:23 Mel (he/they)

doodle

-WP Click-
try this one? i dunno what happened

08:17:08 Help

Doodle
Yeah </3 I literally couldn't have worded that better LOL
Thank you <3

Awh thats not fun, I don't either though so its okay loll

08:16:33 He/They pronouns

Melody,
The link is broken T^T

08:16:01 Mel (he/they)

-WP Click-

I finally got my hands on a black magic dye and I'm so happy!

08:13:30 He/They pronouns

Ever,
Aw, that sucks, now you have to wait a month to fix it TvT (It's like giving yourself a haircut and messing it up so bad you have to wait for it to grow out lol)
Also good luck on the grind ^^
and I don't have any fun plans sadly TvT

08:01:12 Help

Doodle
Thats good to hear X3
Im well :D grinding explore for another 1000 mush because I made a typo when changing my pack name TwT
You got any fun plans ?

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09:29:08 Dark/fire/ice

-WP Click- He been good boy today. He need a paws :3

09:27:39 He/They pronouns

Paws?

-WP Click-

Schadenfreude

09:25:05 Clex Rules

One thing about satellite ear dogs is that they react and bark at literally EVERYTHING. Even a leaf falling outside makes my dog bark like he's ready for battle.

09:25:04 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

-WP Click- should I give her and her sister the same surname as Kyrian as the share a mother?

Ezranian

09:18:48 ezra, he/him

oh it's still happening

09:13:41 Dark/fire/ice

-WP Click- 🥔

09:12:49 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

did not think it would be that long.....

09:12:29 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

09:12:17 Dark/fire/ice

Agreed

09:09:12 He/They pronouns

Chat is super sleepy right now

LIFC_Official

08:39:49 Life In Full Color

-WP Click-
Welcome to LIFC
we are now looking for Butterflies!
Do you what it takes to enter the garden?
Are you a missing piece of The Spectrum?

08:21:40 He/They pronouns

Melody,
Lol, it was a good choice

08:19:34 Mel (he/they)

doodle

thank you! I've had my eye on that dye for a while now so I splurged haha.

08:18:33 He/They pronouns

Melody,
Woah- She's beautiful :o

Ever,
Lol

08:17:23 Mel (he/they)

doodle

-WP Click-
try this one? i dunno what happened

08:17:08 Help

Doodle
Yeah </3 I literally couldn't have worded that better LOL
Thank you <3

Awh thats not fun, I don't either though so its okay loll

08:16:33 He/They pronouns

Melody,
The link is broken T^T

08:16:01 Mel (he/they)

-WP Click-

I finally got my hands on a black magic dye and I'm so happy!

08:13:30 He/They pronouns

08:01:12 Help

Doodle
Thats good to hear X3
Im well :D grinding explore for another 1000 mush because I made a typo when changing my pack name TwT
You got any fun plans ?

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February 24, 2022 12:41 PM

Kortez

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My art has been looking awful lately. I have drawn this character 3 times now, and each attempt looks worse than the last. I need constructive crit, I don't care how brutal you are about it, I won't be hurt.

Feel free to redline!

Attempt 1

Attempt 2

Attempt 3

All (c) 243831/ Me

I have figured it out uwuwu thank you

Edited at March 18, 2022 05:32 PM by Excisus

February 24, 2022 02:48 PM

Former Pack

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ok so the last attempt looks great!

the head on this first one is good, but what are you trying to do on the body?

the second one looks good but the head is a bit big if its what you want then it looks good also

Edited at February 24, 2022 02:49 PM by LucifersWolves

February 24, 2022 02:51 PM

Nezachii

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If you are alright with redlining and some tips (With the redline) I'll be up to help you? If not, that's fine. It's your artwork.

February 24, 2022 02:52 PM

Kortez

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Please do

Nez.ity said:

If you are alright with redlining and some tips (With the redline) I'll be up to help you? If not, that's fine. It's your artwork.

February 24, 2022 04:53 PM

Nezachii

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Doing attempt one because everything else looks lovely *^*. I do not draw canine, anymore--yes I used to dabble back in the //first joined// ages but hopefully, you can just y'know understand that ;). While I love how you decided to do three different ones, I feel like attempt one could have some touch to it-- in case you're feeling nice and give the commissioner something to stare at; not that you know have to. ANYWAYS!

You have that edgy style, where the fur sticks out the most- as I always say go big or go home-- your attempt one could be the " GO BIG" style;o. I love the side tongue and tight collar idea, so I decided to mimic( With your permission) the style and just went crazy with the fur( Pencil work can be MUCH easier when drawing fur, you should take advantage of this punk style because it's there for YOU to improve and grow, even if you are a chibi artist( Only seen your cheebs art).

In short terms, the eye details are the show and tell, usually, when I look at canine art my eyes land on the eyes, it's the first thing I want to see- the expression, the glare, the look. I know your look is more cartoonish which I can't do but hopefully, it's still helpful.

You can do whatever with this, I only did half the job because I got uncomfortable lol.

I'll slowly add more to this so I don't spam you because again, I'm no canine artist.

Redline: (c)Nezitystudio