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Lurking shadows

11:24:57

Oh and Feiella i saw your art and i love it it is so pretty

11:24:32

not good

11:24:24 The Yeeter

How is everyone doing today?

11:24:01 Pack of Sharp Snap

Dragon
Cats try to act like they are not doing anything if stopped.

I gently push my cat away from my food

11:23:44

who is in lgbtq

11:23:20

o you are trans

11:23:19 He/They pronouns

Vax,
Oh! That's super cool! River never heard of that :D

Lurking shadows

11:23:04

Ohhh oki im so sorry,ill try to spell out the words i just have that habit i apoligize

11:23:02 Is a bee

And now someone is hissing so I have to remove 5 cats to investigate, and the culprit is acting like she didn't just attack a kitten...

11:22:49 a rock in your shoe

doodle
that's my gender
im femme representing but gender neutral

11:22:24

Vax
what do you mean

11:22:17 Pack of Sharp Snap

Lurking Shadows
Spell out your words

Love story
Spell out your words and do not invite others offsite

11:22:13 He/They pronouns

Vax,
What? :p

11:22:00 a rock in your shoe

im faesari if anyone cares lol

11:22:00

Lurking shadows
everett is my male name

Lurking shadows

11:21:57

Ahhhh oki thats nice

11:21:31

Lurking shadows
im trans from a girl to a boy

11:21:07

Feiella
are you talking about me

Lurking shadows

11:20:47

sorry to ask are u a gurl or a guy

11:20:45

pls go on it

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Lurking shadows

11:24:57

Oh and Feiella i saw your art and i love it it is so pretty

11:24:32

not good

11:24:24 The Yeeter

How is everyone doing today?

11:24:01 Pack of Sharp Snap

Dragon
Cats try to act like they are not doing anything if stopped.

I gently push my cat away from my food

11:23:44

who is in lgbtq

11:23:20

o you are trans

11:23:19 He/They pronouns

Vax,
Oh! That's super cool! River never heard of that :D

Lurking shadows

11:23:04

Ohhh oki im so sorry,ill try to spell out the words i just have that habit i apoligize

11:23:02 Is a bee

And now someone is hissing so I have to remove 5 cats to investigate, and the culprit is acting like she didn't just attack a kitten...

11:22:49 a rock in your shoe

doodle
that's my gender
im femme representing but gender neutral

11:22:24

Vax
what do you mean

11:22:17 Pack of Sharp Snap

Lurking Shadows
Spell out your words

Love story
Spell out your words and do not invite others offsite

11:22:13 He/They pronouns

Vax,
What? :p

11:22:00 a rock in your shoe

im faesari if anyone cares lol

11:22:00

Lurking shadows
everett is my male name

Lurking shadows

11:21:57

Ahhhh oki thats nice

11:21:31

Lurking shadows
im trans from a girl to a boy

11:21:07

Feiella
are you talking about me

Lurking shadows

11:20:47

sorry to ask are u a gurl or a guy

11:20:45

pls go on it

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March 3, 2020 12:15 PM

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Any advice/suggestions for this - https://postimg.cc/sQftw23n

(I haven't lined it yet or put in color)

Edited at March 3, 2020 12:29 PM by Flower Field

March 3, 2020 12:19 PM

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It)s adorable! Maybe do some creams or reds when you color it in? Otherwise, beautiful!

March 3, 2020 12:51 PM

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Define the face a bit more. Other than that, it's great!

March 3, 2020 12:52 PM

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I am jealous....why

March 3, 2020 12:54 PM

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The right side of the mouth looks a tad bit distorted to me. And I think it would be rather cool if you gave a bit more attention to the 'extra' flowers or maybe choose one or two types of flowers to use in the entire piece.

Other than that, I think it looks pretty great! That's mostly just my personal opinion.

Edited at March 3, 2020 12:55 PM by Hollow_Howls

March 3, 2020 12:58 PM

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Thanks for the advice so far guys! I'm gonna work on it a bit more then post a new picture of it.

March 4, 2020 04:37 PM

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Here's one of the colored copies! (I made copies to color so I have more if I wanna change something) - https://postimg.cc/5j1YPtVv

Edited at March 4, 2020 04:38 PM by Flower Field

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