Wolf Play : Critique?

10:16:48 Scorpion

why does it seem with my pups that the higher the talents the lower the rarity

Sleep

10:12:00 Kneecap stealer

There ya go

10:07:51 Scorpion

ooo Owl, I just got the birth alert from Honey and the labor alert for Kiara! echo should have hers soon!

10:04:26 tiger\Owl|she\her

Hehe I just had an apple. It was good. But very tiny

10:00:31

Moon
ooo, looks nice :D

10:00:00 Many moons, one me

Snake, you're right, they do look good together

09:56:05

the French toast sticks come in 10lb boxes

09:54:49 Many moons, one me

Yeah ok, I'll make myself pancakes for breakfast, maybe add chocolate chips. The universe demands it, all hail

09:54:21 ezra, he/him

ooh, nice :)

09:53:27

Ezra
lmao, those were pretty good, I'm looking at the Pillsbury cini minis right now. they probably all use the same bulk supplier

09:51:12 ezra, he/him

yeah my college has those french toast sticks that elementary schools all have for some reason. ate some this morning, very good

09:50:23

pancakes would be nice, mini pancakes got me thinking about school breakfast lol some of that stuff was good

09:48:43 ezra, he/him

moonfall-
universe wants pancakes i guess

09:46:47 Many moons, one me

Why did I wake up to a pancake recipe?

09:45:06 tiger\Owl|she\her

Clex kinda cute. She’s good with my pack lol. But I don’t have room for her right now

09:36:18 ezra, he/him

clex-
set free, she's cute! i would take her but affinity with my pack is bad lol

Schadenfreude

09:34:25 Clex Rules

-WP Click-

Soup or set free?

Winterfell

09:03:55 Winter

Ugh I wish you could add more to a raffle whilst it's in progress mine looks a bit bland ;-;

08:55:52

bonsai
It should give you the option when you create the account and login for the first time, you get to pick :D
sorry if the other message was confusing lol

A bonsaitreasure

08:49:43

how to make sure it will a light pack?

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10:16:48 Scorpion

why does it seem with my pups that the higher the talents the lower the rarity

Sleep

10:12:00 Kneecap stealer

There ya go

10:07:51 Scorpion

ooo Owl, I just got the birth alert from Honey and the labor alert for Kiara! echo should have hers soon!

10:04:26 tiger\Owl|she\her

Hehe I just had an apple. It was good. But very tiny

10:00:31

Moon
ooo, looks nice :D

10:00:00 Many moons, one me

Snake, you're right, they do look good together

09:56:05

the French toast sticks come in 10lb boxes

09:54:49 Many moons, one me

Yeah ok, I'll make myself pancakes for breakfast, maybe add chocolate chips. The universe demands it, all hail

09:54:21 ezra, he/him

ooh, nice :)

09:53:27

Ezra
lmao, those were pretty good, I'm looking at the Pillsbury cini minis right now. they probably all use the same bulk supplier

09:51:12 ezra, he/him

yeah my college has those french toast sticks that elementary schools all have for some reason. ate some this morning, very good

09:50:23

pancakes would be nice, mini pancakes got me thinking about school breakfast lol some of that stuff was good

09:48:43 ezra, he/him

moonfall-
universe wants pancakes i guess

09:46:47 Many moons, one me

Why did I wake up to a pancake recipe?

09:45:06 tiger\Owl|she\her

Clex kinda cute. She’s good with my pack lol. But I don’t have room for her right now

09:36:18 ezra, he/him

clex-
set free, she's cute! i would take her but affinity with my pack is bad lol

Schadenfreude

09:34:25 Clex Rules

-WP Click-

Soup or set free?

Winterfell

09:03:55 Winter

Ugh I wish you could add more to a raffle whilst it's in progress mine looks a bit bland ;-;

08:55:52

bonsai
It should give you the option when you create the account and login for the first time, you get to pick :D
sorry if the other message was confusing lol

A bonsaitreasure

08:49:43

how to make sure it will a light pack?

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM