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02:53:21 Nalavara

Click on Realm, then Marketplace. You will see the Full Moon Celebration Shop. The moon flowers are the *money* for purchasing the goods in the FMC shop.

Winterfell

02:48:43 Winter

Renne
Menu > marketplace > full moon celebration shop

Winterfell

02:47:45 Winter

Renne
Moon towers are little items you can spend in the fmc shop you can buy many things with them . You can get them from howling wrestling exploring ect

Savik

02:47:32 Nalavara

YAY!!!!!

Ghoulish

02:46:23

I found the damnn thing!

Savik

02:38:29 Nalavara

When the mods come online they can help you.

lovrenee

02:38:26 renee

What are moon flowers and what do I do with them?

Savik

02:35:10 Nalavara

I had problems with a single square that was not where the map said it was. It took me over a half hour to find that single square.

Ghoulish

02:31:34

Guys how do I change my pack picture

Ghoulish

02:15:39

I can’t get to it because of the stupid lines up have to stay on

Ghoulish

02:15:13

I do but it’s no helpppp

Savik

02:14:36 Nalavara

Do you have an explorer's map?

moonlight_luminary

02:09:47 Lumi/Moon/Moony

I just sent a score in slither... ;-; it's literally zero–

Ghoulish

01:45:52

I can’t find this dang last eme,y on Level 3 of the forest

Moonfall

01:00:16 Many moons, one me

I'm going to go make a cocoon and burrow now. I am currently able to feel my skin

Pink kitty🐈

12:10:05 Kneecap stealer

I just found a great deal on some cups $8 per cup and there's 4 cups

Pink kitty🐈

12:04:10 Kneecap stealer

What did I just read...

snake

12:01:40

my definition of chaos in the chat is when its full of new players who've never read the rules lol

Moonfall

11:55:31 Many moons, one me

Maybe the chaos is the friends we made along the way

Moonfall

11:55:13 Many moons, one me

I'm back from reading, I need to charge my Kindle.
So Sacrifice= chaos and Kháos= chaos
So mod of any type means chaos... Or maybe wp=chaos. Or maybe just chat itself?

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Savik

02:53:21 Nalavara

Click on Realm, then Marketplace. You will see the Full Moon Celebration Shop. The moon flowers are the *money* for purchasing the goods in the FMC shop.

Winterfell

02:48:43 Winter

Renne
Menu > marketplace > full moon celebration shop

Winterfell

02:47:45 Winter

Renne
Moon towers are little items you can spend in the fmc shop you can buy many things with them . You can get them from howling wrestling exploring ect

Savik

02:47:32 Nalavara

YAY!!!!!

Ghoulish

02:46:23

I found the damnn thing!

Savik

02:38:29 Nalavara

When the mods come online they can help you.

lovrenee

02:38:26 renee

What are moon flowers and what do I do with them?

Savik

02:35:10 Nalavara

I had problems with a single square that was not where the map said it was. It took me over a half hour to find that single square.

Ghoulish

02:31:34

Guys how do I change my pack picture

Ghoulish

02:15:39

I can’t get to it because of the stupid lines up have to stay on

Ghoulish

02:15:13

I do but it’s no helpppp

Savik

02:14:36 Nalavara

Do you have an explorer's map?

moonlight_luminary

02:09:47 Lumi/Moon/Moony

I just sent a score in slither... ;-; it's literally zero–

Ghoulish

01:45:52

I can’t find this dang last eme,y on Level 3 of the forest

Moonfall

01:00:16 Many moons, one me

I'm going to go make a cocoon and burrow now. I am currently able to feel my skin

Pink kitty🐈

12:10:05 Kneecap stealer

I just found a great deal on some cups $8 per cup and there's 4 cups

Pink kitty🐈

12:04:10 Kneecap stealer

What did I just read...

snake

12:01:40

my definition of chaos in the chat is when its full of new players who've never read the rules lol

Moonfall

11:55:31 Many moons, one me

Maybe the chaos is the friends we made along the way

Moonfall

11:55:13 Many moons, one me

I'm back from reading, I need to charge my Kindle.
So Sacrifice= chaos and Kháos= chaos
So mod of any type means chaos... Or maybe wp=chaos. Or maybe just chat itself?

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September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

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September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

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September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

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September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

Critique

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

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September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

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September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

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September 19, 2018 09:15 AM

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Thanks every for the critique

Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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