Wolf Play : Critique?

09:15:51 Many moons, one me

Yesterday I bought the cats one of those scratching post house boxes, and since I put it together last night, they haven't stopped playing with it so far

09:09:05 Many moons, one me

Sleep
I do, I like it! Perfect for Easter

09:06:23 Kneecap stealer

Do you not see the name change

starrii-featherz

09:05:17 starrii, Lucida, Hex

Finally, Margo popped, not sure if I want to keep anyone from this litter or not

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09:03:48 Many moons, one me

Ok please I beg you stop being content, I just wanna see if I can get a twin from a twins son and a twin
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09:02:32 Many moons, one me

Hi sleep!

09:01:23 Kneecap stealer

Hi moon

08:55:55 Many moons, one me

Rat Lord
Such a mood. I'll go if I must but now I swear in the name of chocolate milk because that's never let me down. All hail chocolate milk

08:53:22 Phoenix~

MLadySkylar

08:44:42 P'Sky/Sky-kun

You need to bury your food to prevent other packs/animals from finding it

08:43:53 Kneecap stealer

Go to lifecenter

08:34:09 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

4ever
We don’t have food, just a lame ass piece of bread and the smallest water cup ever T-T

08:31:49 Phoenix~

Please stop stealing my food because i have only 50 feedings:(

08:29:53 Kneecap stealer

Someone yell at me to get out of bed and get ready

08:28:32 Kneecap stealer

So did mine, I go just for the food they have

08:27:22 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

4ever
I use to but my parents forced me to much so I don’t go anymore

08:25:10 Kneecap stealer

Why, if you have beef with church, don't you go too

08:22:49 Kneecap stealer

Rat

You want me to go just because you have beef with church lmao

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09:15:51 Many moons, one me

Yesterday I bought the cats one of those scratching post house boxes, and since I put it together last night, they haven't stopped playing with it so far

09:09:05 Many moons, one me

Sleep
I do, I like it! Perfect for Easter

09:06:23 Kneecap stealer

Do you not see the name change

starrii-featherz

09:05:17 starrii, Lucida, Hex

Finally, Margo popped, not sure if I want to keep anyone from this litter or not

-WP Click-
-WP Click-
-WP Click-

09:03:48 Many moons, one me

Ok please I beg you stop being content, I just wanna see if I can get a twin from a twins son and a twin
-WP Click-

09:02:32 Many moons, one me

Hi sleep!

09:01:23 Kneecap stealer

Hi moon

08:55:55 Many moons, one me

Rat Lord
Such a mood. I'll go if I must but now I swear in the name of chocolate milk because that's never let me down. All hail chocolate milk

08:53:22 Phoenix~

MLadySkylar

08:44:42 P'Sky/Sky-kun

You need to bury your food to prevent other packs/animals from finding it

08:43:53 Kneecap stealer

Go to lifecenter

08:34:09 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

4ever
We don’t have food, just a lame ass piece of bread and the smallest water cup ever T-T

08:31:49 Phoenix~

Please stop stealing my food because i have only 50 feedings:(

08:29:53 Kneecap stealer

Someone yell at me to get out of bed and get ready

08:28:32 Kneecap stealer

So did mine, I go just for the food they have

08:27:22 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

4ever
I use to but my parents forced me to much so I don’t go anymore

08:25:10 Kneecap stealer

Why, if you have beef with church, don't you go too

08:22:49 Kneecap stealer

Rat

You want me to go just because you have beef with church lmao

Willow moonlight

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Feiella

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM