Wolf Play : Criticism Needed

11:23:50 Rook

omg. i was just wishing I had an emerald dye so I could customize my gb and bree ACTUALLY gave me one lol

11:20:09 Caesar

only 75 shamrocks until the trophy! the grind is slow but doable :'D

Echo Eclipse

11:20:07 Echo (They/He)

Paws and gear/decor ideas?
-WP Click-

Ezranian

11:13:21 ezra, he/him

owl-
if you apply them at the bottom of your den page it gives you more cp to give to your wolves

11:12:48 tiger\Owl|she\her

What are the bronze figs for??

11:04:07 Caesar

appraise all button in montak, oh how i love you <3333

11:03:31 Caesar

bird boi, i dont think theyd be worth the price, as long as hearthstones exist :')

11:00:34 tiger\Owl|she\her

Nightlight use the sales chat

10:59:23 Rook

is it crazy to say I wish Lucius sold bronze figs? like am I too greedy for wishing I could use a 3rd currency to get them? xD

nighlight

10:58:20

can anyone buy my wolf

10:57:22 Rook

thank you guys <33 I think he looks so cool. I can't decide what background to give him, though >.<

So many good backgrounds but he doesn't really fit them

10:56:00 Many moons, one me

Sabbath
He looks so pretty!

10:55:55 Caesar

bird boi, all the paws for the pretty dude <33

10:54:10 tiger\Owl|she\her

Bye. I think I’m going somewhere so gotta go! See ya laters!

10:53:32 Rook

paws? :3
-WP Click-

10:52:47 tiger\Owl|she\her

Same

10:52:32 Many moons, one me

Harry kinda looks like my boy Thumbs. Love the Oreo kitties

10:52:11 tiger\Owl|she\her

Again*

10:52:03 tiger\Owl|she\her

Also if I clean his room in about in hour it’s a mess agian

Vax

10:51:59 a rock in your shoe

imma go work, see ya

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11:23:50 Rook

omg. i was just wishing I had an emerald dye so I could customize my gb and bree ACTUALLY gave me one lol

11:20:09 Caesar

only 75 shamrocks until the trophy! the grind is slow but doable :'D

Echo Eclipse

11:20:07 Echo (They/He)

Paws and gear/decor ideas?
-WP Click-

Ezranian

11:13:21 ezra, he/him

owl-
if you apply them at the bottom of your den page it gives you more cp to give to your wolves

11:12:48 tiger\Owl|she\her

What are the bronze figs for??

11:04:07 Caesar

appraise all button in montak, oh how i love you <3333

11:03:31 Caesar

bird boi, i dont think theyd be worth the price, as long as hearthstones exist :')

11:00:34 tiger\Owl|she\her

Nightlight use the sales chat

10:59:23 Rook

is it crazy to say I wish Lucius sold bronze figs? like am I too greedy for wishing I could use a 3rd currency to get them? xD

nighlight

10:58:20

can anyone buy my wolf

10:57:22 Rook

thank you guys <33 I think he looks so cool. I can't decide what background to give him, though >.<

So many good backgrounds but he doesn't really fit them

10:56:00 Many moons, one me

Sabbath
He looks so pretty!

10:55:55 Caesar

bird boi, all the paws for the pretty dude <33

10:54:10 tiger\Owl|she\her

Bye. I think I’m going somewhere so gotta go! See ya laters!

10:53:32 Rook

paws? :3
-WP Click-

10:52:47 tiger\Owl|she\her

Same

10:52:32 Many moons, one me

Harry kinda looks like my boy Thumbs. Love the Oreo kitties

10:52:11 tiger\Owl|she\her

Again*

10:52:03 tiger\Owl|she\her

Also if I clean his room in about in hour it’s a mess agian

Vax

10:51:59 a rock in your shoe

imma go work, see ya

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November 9, 2017 10:25 PM

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https://s2.postimg.org/cm6tysat5/Screen_Shot_2017-11-09_at_11.21.15_PM.png

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Edited at November 9, 2017 10:28 PM by Aphmau clan

November 9, 2017 10:28 PM

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Not bad (\^-^/)

November 9, 2017 10:29 PM

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It's not really that bad in all honesty.

The tail and maybe the front leg on the side we're viewing could use a little work maybe, though the tail could actually depend on the breed of cat the drawing is of.

But overall it's pretty good

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:30 PM by Destinations End

November 10, 2017 01:28 AM

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The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:

https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:

January 1, 2018 09:11 PM

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Siarczek said:
The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:

This helps me out! Thank you

January 3, 2018 03:49 AM