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 Doodle Dragon
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Ever,
I wish ToT

Cinn,
Finee
 Cinnamon Bloom
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Nightless End wakes up Mitsuki.
Stats: Social +1
Mood: Playful

leave her alone she's pregnant
 EvergreenHils
03:19:48 Ever / Luna
Doodle
I thought you meant all time chatters and I was about to be like

‘..you chatted that much that quickly?!’
 Cinnamon Bloom
03:19:21 Cinn / Ace
dd
that is a man child
this one is fat
come get him :(
hes too comfy for me to move :(
i'll feel bad :(
 Kháos
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oops- I died for a while. I spy a revamped login page. 👀
 Doodle Dragon
03:18:21 He/They pronouns
Cinn,
I stole Garfield
 Doodle Dragon
03:18:09 He/They pronouns
7 more chats and I get past Eye of Eternity :p
 Cinnamon Bloom
03:17:57 Cinn / Ace
doodle
who else would it be
you only have one fat cat
 Moonfall
03:17:41 Many moons, one me
Séamus grunts with satisfaction as they wolf down their meal.

Mood: Happy
 Doodle Dragon
03:17:34 He/They pronouns
Ever,
Alright lol
 Doodle Dragon
03:17:23 He/They pronouns
Ever,
Oo okay :p

Cinn,
Lucario?
 EvergreenHils
03:17:14 Ever / Luna
Doodle
Add some more blue
 Cinnamon Bloom
03:17:03 Cinn / Ace
doodle get your fat cat so i can do my chore
 EvergreenHils
03:16:58 Ever / Luna
Nothin much
 Doodle Dragon
03:16:55 He/They pronouns
Does this look okay?

-Click-
 Doodle Dragon
03:16:25 He/They pronouns
What'd I miss? :p
 Moonfall
03:15:14 Many moons, one me
Cinn
That's just bree lol
 Cinnamon Bloom
03:14:08 Cinn / Ace
Bree expertly cracks open the Geode and pale crystals are revealed! Bree looks and says "This quartz geode is very common and I don't need any more. But I will give you this for your efforts."
Feathers

i knew i shouldn't have wasted my last apple
 Master Darkfire
03:11:05 Dark/fire/ice
Well I gotta go
 Cinnamon Bloom
03:10:54 Cinn / Ace
i need to do my chore but this fatass cat is on me
doodle
doodle come get your cat

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 Doodle Dragon
03:20:15 He/They pronouns
Ever,
I wish ToT

Cinn,
Finee
 Cinnamon Bloom
03:20:04 Cinn / Ace
Nightless End wakes up Mitsuki.
Stats: Social +1
Mood: Playful

leave her alone she's pregnant
 EvergreenHils
03:19:48 Ever / Luna
Doodle
I thought you meant all time chatters and I was about to be like

‘..you chatted that much that quickly?!’
 Cinnamon Bloom
03:19:21 Cinn / Ace
dd
that is a man child
this one is fat
come get him :(
hes too comfy for me to move :(
i'll feel bad :(
 Kháos
03:19:11 Kaos || Kháos
oops- I died for a while. I spy a revamped login page. 👀
 Doodle Dragon
03:18:21 He/They pronouns
Cinn,
I stole Garfield
 Doodle Dragon
03:18:09 He/They pronouns
7 more chats and I get past Eye of Eternity :p
 Cinnamon Bloom
03:17:57 Cinn / Ace
doodle
who else would it be
you only have one fat cat
 Moonfall
03:17:41 Many moons, one me
Séamus grunts with satisfaction as they wolf down their meal.

Mood: Happy
 Doodle Dragon
03:17:34 He/They pronouns
Ever,
Alright lol
 Doodle Dragon
03:17:23 He/They pronouns
Ever,
Oo okay :p

Cinn,
Lucario?
 EvergreenHils
03:17:14 Ever / Luna
Doodle
Add some more blue
 Cinnamon Bloom
03:17:03 Cinn / Ace
doodle get your fat cat so i can do my chore
 EvergreenHils
03:16:58 Ever / Luna
Nothin much
 Doodle Dragon
03:16:55 He/They pronouns
Does this look okay?

-Click-
 Doodle Dragon
03:16:25 He/They pronouns
What'd I miss? :p
 Moonfall
03:15:14 Many moons, one me
Cinn
That's just bree lol
 Cinnamon Bloom
03:14:08 Cinn / Ace
Bree expertly cracks open the Geode and pale crystals are revealed! Bree looks and says "This quartz geode is very common and I don't need any more. But I will give you this for your efforts."
Feathers

i knew i shouldn't have wasted my last apple
 Master Darkfire
03:11:05 Dark/fire/ice
Well I gotta go
 Cinnamon Bloom
03:10:54 Cinn / Ace
i need to do my chore but this fatass cat is on me
doodle
doodle come get your cat




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CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 05:13 PM


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So I'm looking for critique of my art
When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for
Thank you

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Huge wolf project [sketch]
https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

#2
Hide and Seek [HEE contest]
http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack
CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 06:54 PM


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new artz added
CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 06:59 PM


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Um they both look fine to me xD
CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 07:32 PM


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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.
CritiqueSeptember 19, 2018 03:31 AM


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Thank you :D
CritiqueSeptember 19, 2018 05:07 AM


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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.
Round out the ears a little?
The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!
CritiqueSeptember 19, 2018 08:25 AM


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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?
CritiqueSeptember 19, 2018 09:15 AM


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Thanks every for the critique
Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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