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Royal, where did they over use capitalization? Names are always to be capitalized, as is places, and titles of books, etc. And always capitalize at the beginning of a sentence- Also even thought there is a proper way to end the paragraph with someone speaking, as a writer it doesn't matter, authors break the English rules all the time, because well they are authors XD
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Only thing I found that was maybe wrong was the way the quotes are used, and again I could not be right on this but they way I've always been told to use them, Example: "Hi" The way I see you using them " Hi! " or "Hi! " vica versa. Anyways that's all, your a very talented writer and I envy you XD I enjoy writing a lot and I'm impressed with how detailed these are! <3 |
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Firefox said:
Royal, where did they over use capitalization? Names are always to be capitalized, as is places, and titles of books, etc. And always capitalize at the beginning of a sentence- Also even thought there is a proper way to end the paragraph with someone speaking, as a writer it doesn't matter, authors break the English rules all the time, because well they are authors XD
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Only thing I found that was maybe wrong was the way the quotes are used, and again I could not be right on this but they way I've always been told to use them, Example: "Hi" The way I see you using them " Hi! " or "Hi! " vica versa. Anyways that's all, your a very talented writer and I envy you XD I enjoy writing a lot and I'm impressed with how detailed these are! <3
I meant all capitalization. Example: "Come ON. IT'S TIME TO GO!" instead of "Come on!! It's time to go!" -example not taken from the chapters |
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