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01:45:38 Lil Techy | Techno

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18?! That's the most I've seen you lose in a while.

I am not doing so good right now, but I'll manage. I have work in about 2 hours as well so that'll be interesting.

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01:42:15 Cae, Blue

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Best pup gets the defect? Oh, power of complaining, how i love you XD

Tech, awful the worst my villain origin story got new lore: i lost 18 litters ;-;
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Cres

how goes it?

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Hey tech ^^

01:38:54 Hallow, Eve

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Worst pup gets the boost exhibit 7151
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Hey:) again lol

01:33:09 Lil Techy | Techno

cres!

01:31:45 Cae, Blue

Well obviously i dont either 🥲 doing it for the plot i guess

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01:28:28 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Cae
Ive said this before but I dont know how you do it

01:27:24 Cae, Blue

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The only thing making 18 missed litters better somehow sobs

01:27:05 Cae, Blue

Archive, 3 spaces from breeding spec dont show for basics

Em, thats my one day, and i have 3 days total :')

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01:26:13 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

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My puppy boom will be 40 litters

01:24:52 Hallow, Eve

The duds this litter is devastating

01:24:13 Cae, Blue

18 lost litters, and those were supposed to be best ones sobs

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Oof, mine does start for another 2 days

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April 16, 2018 09:07 PM

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Here's the image

https://s14.postimg.cc/4h7dmgk29/Random_Galaxy.png

For some reason, something's been really bothering me about this picture and I can't seem to figure out what.

All critiques are appreciated, or just tell me what you wish was changed

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 09:12 PM

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Maybe more stars? We don't really see them

Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

April 16, 2018 09:37 PM

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DarkCloudClan said:
Maybe more stars? We don't really see them
Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

Alright, lemme spam the stars and update the picture XD

Edit: UPDATED

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 11:31 PM

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Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

April 16, 2018 11:53 PM

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a m b e r said:
Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

XD Thanks, let me update it again

April 16, 2018 11:55 PM

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I really like it! Possibly a couple other colors blended? Lighter blues and brighter pinks maybe. Just a subtle change.

April 17, 2018 12:48 AM

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Maybe if you make it a bit lighter?

April 17, 2018 01:48 AM

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I love It! I don't know much about art, but the purple cloud/nebula looks a little on the denser side.

Still, it's really beautiful! :D

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