I like the first one.
my art is feeling, messy. Like traditional. A lot of times stiff, and lifeless. Weird proportions.
things I would like to improve on
1. cleanliness
2.fur
3. Shading
4 less stiff
5 proportions
flipping the canvas helps a whole lot! Hense, the first one looking so much better.
i really need help! Please don't have it to do with styluses, I can't get one at the moment.