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Imma tell you cataracsts It's mainly just anatomy i don't really have anything else you know I love your art also kinda consistency? while it's obvious it's your art style while looking at your art, somethings just vary between your pieces thats all goodbye
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Alright, first of all, I love your style! It's very satisfying to look at, and your fur is very good! I really like the colors, some artists are a little excessive in how saturated their colors are, but these are good, they don't hurt my eyes! Ok, time for some critisism! First: I think the eyes of your characters feel a little... well, dead. I think they would benefit from some sharper specular highlights. It wouldn't hurt to add a little more detail to the fur, but I think it's fine either way. I noticed on the second image you posted that the white fur is obscuring part of one of your characters eyes, and it looks a little bit off, probably because the shape of one of the fur clumps matches the shape of the eye just a little too closely. Overall, though, I think everything looks great! Keep making art man, you're really talented! Edited at November 6, 2021 03:27 PM by Eternal Calamity
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swaggyrollie said: Imma tell you cataracsts It's mainly just anatomy i don't really have anything else you know I love your art also kinda consistency? while it's obvious it's your art style while looking at your art, somethings just vary between your pieces thats all goodbye
i know my style varies a lot :sob: literallyc ryign but its mostly just level of effort tbh Eternal Calamity said: Alright, first of all, I love your style! It's very satisfying to look at, and your fur is very good! I really like the colors, some artists are a little excessive in how saturated their colors are, but these are good, they don't hurt my eyes! Ok, time for some critisism! First: I think the eyes of your characters feel a little... well, dead. I think they would benefit from some sharper specular highlights. It wouldn't hurt to add a little more detail to the fur, but I think it's fine either way. I noticed on the second image you posted that the white fur is obscuring part of one of your characters eyes, and it looks a little bit off, probably because the shape of one of the fur clumps matches the shape of the eye just a little too closely. Overall, though, I think everything looks great! Keep making art man, you're really talented!
thank you for teh critique! this one actually helped so much! i have been thinking my eyes have looked off for quite a while so i'll try the highlights! as well as for the eye-fur thing, i was struggling drawing the second eye for so long so i kind of just covered it up xD
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donnt cyr pls ill cry roo and then we are all crying
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swaggyrollie said: donnt cyr pls ill cry roo and then we are all crying
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new oc (they aren't new at this point)
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