|
Darkseeker
|
Merry Crisis said: lemme know when you figure it out! an no :0 karen without the karen cut? blasphemy -
Hehe- If Karin was a human, she would have long, straight brown hair. She has a ref sheet somewhere showing the brown color-
|
|
|
|
Neutral
|
Merry Crisis said: also. How do y'all feel about forcing a kilo timeskip even though the scene isn't quite over? Just to keep things moving.
Yes, this would be good. UwU
|
|
|
|
Lightbringer
|
Yeah, I think that's what imma end up doing :') I'll give it a day.
|
|
|
|
Darkseeker
|
asdfghjkl SO you Said Gin can lIVe aDfter- Now just a Rache/Frosch, obstical, and then the asdfghjkl- RiGHt?
|
|
|
|
Lightbringer
|
yup yup also agility course is pinned -
|
|
|
|
Darkseeker
|
|
|
Darkseeker
|
So I edited the first chapter again (the perfectionist in me is coming out- hELp) I tried to write less describing what the world looks like and more what's going on and whats happened- So ah- Woo >.>
Also, I took some of Spaghetti's editing- as I did realize it was the after the after the after the XD I don't know why, but I hate using this: - in my writing- I always use it when I casually write, but in stories, it feels bleh to me XD
|
|
|
|
Lightbringer
|
oh yeah, hyphens I think they're called? They're super informal, and I do use them in casual RPs at times, but you can't use em in analytical stuff and whatnot -
|
|
|
|
Darkseeker
|
I'm on here instead of paying attention to my zoom-
|
|
|
|
Darkseeker
|
YeS Do that eVERyDaY
I mean I use the hyphen in dialogue- but for me, dialogue as a rule doesn't need grammar because I know I don't use it when I talk XD
|
|
|