Boundless said:

Silver

:0 I love it! Definitely let us know when the next chapter comes out!

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Doom

Some wording that could be better here and there, but I'll try to look at it tomorrow when I'm more awake and help you out

And I thought it was interesting. I think the cliffhanger/chapters that start out in action scenes may end up being more intruiging, but your chapter has really good writing and is detailed, so I think it balances itself out.

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Celery

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w h y

like I know why but w h y