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I 100% agree with that completely unbiased, humble opinion. - I don't think so..? I'll have to read through all of our pages lol - I'm keeping Amy, I think. I'll probably keep Rhett and just finish him lmao |
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alright, so it'll be the same cast! we can probably just start when rhett's all set, then ^^. i reread over all my characters and in the end i'm probably not gonna change anything except adjusting ages, sexualities, and adding the mono/ambi/poly status to make more sense and be a little sillier. as for what we need to discuss, i think all is fine as long as you make the starters about the guy(s) coming to talk to the characters and grt them moving??? i think it should just be one set of introductory posts and then the plot should start, since i don't think i could come up with enough plotless content to keep shit up on earth for two posts straight ;;. |
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ah! here's a question, actually -- when did the earth kids disappear to earth and how? what did the parents see? |
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Sounds good to me! Hopefully I'll be able to finish Rhett within today or tomorrow- I have his playlist going to try and get my brain on him lol - Well, the first post was planned to just be morning routines and whatnot, and then the second post would be them getting transported to Vebreo/getting contacted to go to the temple. But if you want then we can totally combine those two and have the first post be them doing the morning routine and getting contacted/transported. - As for when the ones sent to earth were sent and whatnot. They were sent to earth by the time they were 2, most likely earlier though. As for how, the same way they're being brought back. Which is basically teleportation, more or less.
The parents would've been told by the same one contacting the people now that their child is destined for a story and that they'd be sent to earth. So the day their child just kind of disappeared wasn't too terrible for anyone. They knew ahead of time, and all. But again, it's basically just teleportation. So one second the kid was there and the next they weren't. |
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ah, i think first being entirely intro and second being them getting transported is fine! i saw you say two posts of them being on earth and misunderstood that as two posts of just routines. can do one, but two? my writing mundanity skills still unfortunately only go so far. but one dedicated to it is good! anyway, that sounds good to me! with that in mind, what age did rhett disappear? i think it would be interesting to have aster be born in order to fill the gap rhett being sent off for Story Purposes left, so i'd have to time it accordingly. |
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Honestly, same- I can only do so much of routines too lmao So I thought the first post being used for routine and whatnot so that we read what they're like without the story would be good enough. Just so that we get the full effect of the metaphorical rugs being pulled out from underneath them in the second post lmao - Good question- I was thinking 1. And since the parents would've been told at the time of his birth, then Aster's birth would probably line up pretty well |
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yeah, that checks out! we want to be able to get to know the characters a little when theyre calm and grappling with the issues of normal life before they're shot into the plot and freak the fuck out :) and yeah, if that's the case and the parents knew from birth, aster already lines up basically perfectly. wonder what sort of issues being born in order to fill a gap can lead to. hum hum. i adjusted everything i plan on adjusting, by the way! thought it would be funny if dulcie was on the older side and anton was on the younger since one is incredibly naive and the other is incredibly jaded. sometimes you just have to build the little details of characters by just deciding what's funniest, a lesson i have only learned recently but i have learned it well. |
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Yep! It'll make the freak out both funnier and sadder. It'll be great. - Haha, mhmmm, who knows - Great- I'll take a look and fix the masterlist soon - Do you want a picrew or two of The Twin that's awake? |
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sure, i'll take the picrew! |
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Alright! Here they are! The one that's awake for this story is the one using neutral pronouns known as Kataru. - |
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