Wolf Play : Some critique on recent peices

10:59:15 Vah hoards mushies

Urux

Ahh, no worries!

Leaves Beware

10:54:19 Leaf she/her

Raider jumps over Library Of Archives and annoys them.

Urux

10:50:56 Urox, Uris

If I don't reply, I'm just prepping my lunch for tomorrow :P

Urux

10:49:56 Urox, Uris

Vah
They're at a party </3 I doubt they'll see it but I sent one to try haha

Will
I need all these appliances haha. I'm moving in with my uni friends, but they're all international students, so I get all the house stuff when we're done with uni >:)

10:49:44 Vah hoards mushies

Will

Oooh fried rice sounds so good. ;-;

10:49:10 Will

@Vah

Ah rats :(
I'm sharing my fried rice with you

10:48:48 Will

@Urux

My mom's gift for my apartment when I moved in was a kettle lmao😭
She knows me so well

10:48:39 Vah hoards mushies

Will

Oof it's the storage for me. ^^' I already have not a whole lot of space as is.

Urux

Ooof could you maybe text someone and see?

FireWeaver

10:48:10 DH Obsessed

PVP, anybody?

Urux

10:48:00 Urox, Uris

Will
i found a sage green mini air fryer at kmart today and I want it so badly to add to my moving out box haha

Leaves Beware

10:47:37 Leaf she/her

Love Trap feels empathetic and charges the Coyote. It jumps back and runs off. The child is safe! You gain Moves +5.

Urux

10:47:35 Urox, Uris

My whole household is not home and I have no clue if they're back for dinner </3 now I have no clue what to prep

10:47:18 Will

@Vah

I have a mini one *^*

The brand Dash makes mini products

I bought mine second hand

It holds two cups!

Still needs stored, but definitely easier than a fullsize

10:45:22 Vah hoards mushies

Mag

Oooh that one is cute.

Will

Oooh a rice cooker. I want one so bad but I have 0 space for it. ;-;

Magnus Bane

10:45:09 Mag/Maggy

-WP Click-
*^*

Leaves Beware

10:45:06 Leaf she/her

You hear a small child crying in the distance. Why do humans leave their kids in random places?, you wonder.

10:44:40 Will

Oh my god rice cookers are miraculous
How could I have survived without one this long

Magnus Bane

10:44:37 Mag/Maggy

Peppermint bark

10:43:30 Vah hoards mushies

Oooh which dye?

Magnus Bane

10:41:28 Mag/Maggy

Found a dye I want to use but it's 10 apples. I'll have to snag it next month during the event>.>

Refresh

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.

Quests

Alliance Battles

Challenges

Hourly Damage Variances

	Coyote : +1
	Mojave Green Rattler : 0
	Polar Bear : +3

Spring

Day Weather:

Sunny

Forums

→ Wolf Play is a fun game! Sign Up Now! ←

Forums > Artwork > Art Help

August 6, 2019 08:11 PM

Neutral

Posts: 0
#1535628
Give Award

Title says it all

https://wolfplaygame.com/forums.php?f=5&t=38129

August 6, 2019 08:26 PM

Neutral

Posts: 0
#1535688
Give Award

Those are really good, I think you're a talented artist but you could work on better lineart. I really love your work, you're one of the better artists on this site.

August 6, 2019 08:28 PM

Neutral

Posts: 0
#1535697
Give Award

Sablecrest Guardians said:
Those are really good, I think you're a talented artist but you could work on better lineart. I really love your work, you're one of the better artists on this site.

The lineart for my work is something I'm always trying to improve and bring in new techmiques

But wow never would I ever think that so thank you so so much ❤️

August 7, 2019 01:15 AM

Neutral

Posts: 0
#1536591
Give Award

Okay, so first thing, your art is absolutely beautiful! I love the first, second, and fourth example the best as they really do have nice shading, coloring, background and the proportions are spot on!

As for the fifth I think maybe the horse could blend with the background a bit more if you know what I mean? It doesn’t exactly fit with the background. For number six I’d say maybe make the muzzle a tad thinner for the muzzle looks slightly off to me.

For 7, I have no words, just spot on!

I really do think you have amazing skills! P,ease keep up your amazing artwork

Edited at August 7, 2019 01:15 AM by Pride Klaw

August 7, 2019 04:52 AM

Neutral

Posts: 0
#1536706
Give Award

Oh wow thank you so much!

And yep I agree with everything you say fior 7

Pride Klaw said:
Okay, so first thing, your art is absolutely beautiful! I love the first, second, and fourth example the best as they really do have nice shading, coloring, background and the proportions are spot on!

As for the fifth I think maybe the horse could blend with the background a bit more if you know what I mean? It doesnÂ’t exactly fit with the background. For number six IÂ’d say maybe make the muzzle a tad thinner for the muzzle looks slightly off to me.

For 7, I have no words, just spot on!

I really do think you have amazing skills! P,ease keep up your amazing artwork

August 7, 2019 07:33 PM

Neutral

Posts: 0
#1538411
Give Award

Still looking for some constructive criticism

August 7, 2019 08:18 PM

Twonahalfer

Lightbringer

Posts: 5186
#1538513
Give Award

I think on 5 and 9 could be better blended into the background, and the rest I would clean up the line work.

August 7, 2019 08:19 PM