Wolf Play : Critique?

07:42:45 tern | they/he

the axan version is stunning though

07:42:11 tern | they/he

em
it really is :33 the purple is so nice but doesnt fit my pack theme and im so mad about it

iGoddexxe

07:38:18 Em (She/They)

Omg the wisteria pelt is in the custom maker 🤩🤩🤩 it’s so PRETTY

07:37:13 tern | they/he

eer
yeahh </3 and i wont have time to do it when i get home

07:37:11 Zeppelin

Evergreen
Dude I adore LOTR, in January I managed to get tickets to see Return of the King extended edition in the cinema >:D I cried so bad

Mmm my friend has a birthday party coming up on Saturday that I'm still debating on

07:35:40 Juicy Arm Boy

EyeGuy
Oh </3

07:34:02 tern | they/he

eer
im not home </3

07:32:57 Juicy Arm Boy

EyeGuy
Fix em now

Zeppelin
Ooh lord of the rings X3 love those movies haha

Uhhh nothin much, boutta head out unfortunately
Got any fun plans for the weekend?

07:30:49 tern | they/he

ive gotta fix my headphones this sucks
somebody yell at me to do that if im online tomorrow

07:30:40 Zeppelin

Evergreen
I'm chillin, currently in the process of rewatching Lord of the Rings. You?

07:29:06 Zeppelin

I'll also add my own two cents to this whole family situation topic that I have numerous family members who I just don't talk to even though I've known them for years lol. Completely fine to not want to pursue something with a stranger

07:28:07 Juicy Arm Boy

Zeppelin
Wassup. How are ya?

07:27:48 NRC/Raven

Never mind I'm gonna go now bye

07:24:34 NRC/Raven

I have a loreal Paris nail polish....

07:23:03 Pixie, Vul | ♈

One of the best things I did for myself is protected my own happiness first.

07:22:50 Zeppelin

wassuuup

07:22:12 Pixie, Vul | ♈

Sky
Just because she's related doesn't mean you have to have a relationship with her. Blood means nothing if you don't know her. I have an older sister who I knew very briefly and I barely ever talk to her, and it's never bothered me. Sometimes I don't even count her when people ask me how many siblings I have

Moonfall

07:21:14 Many moons, one me

Vul
I'm not even the intended target and that hits

MLadySkylar

07:18:25 P'Sky/Sky-kun

Vul

Thank you,
Im just not interested in connecting with a total stranger who lives so far away.
He calls her my sister and I just responded with a by blood only

07:18:14 NRC/Raven

I have sooo many nail polishes ahhh and most of its old stuff

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07:42:45 tern | they/he

the axan version is stunning though

07:42:11 tern | they/he

em
it really is :33 the purple is so nice but doesnt fit my pack theme and im so mad about it

iGoddexxe

07:38:18 Em (She/They)

Omg the wisteria pelt is in the custom maker 🤩🤩🤩 it’s so PRETTY

07:37:13 tern | they/he

eer
yeahh </3 and i wont have time to do it when i get home

07:37:11 Zeppelin

07:35:40 Juicy Arm Boy

EyeGuy
Oh </3

07:34:02 tern | they/he

eer
im not home </3

07:32:57 Juicy Arm Boy

EyeGuy
Fix em now

Zeppelin
Ooh lord of the rings X3 love those movies haha

Uhhh nothin much, boutta head out unfortunately
Got any fun plans for the weekend?

07:30:49 tern | they/he

ive gotta fix my headphones this sucks
somebody yell at me to do that if im online tomorrow

07:30:40 Zeppelin

Evergreen
I'm chillin, currently in the process of rewatching Lord of the Rings. You?

07:29:06 Zeppelin

07:28:07 Juicy Arm Boy

Zeppelin
Wassup. How are ya?

07:27:48 NRC/Raven

Never mind I'm gonna go now bye

07:24:34 NRC/Raven

I have a loreal Paris nail polish....

07:23:03 Pixie, Vul | ♈

One of the best things I did for myself is protected my own happiness first.

07:22:50 Zeppelin

wassuuup

07:22:12 Pixie, Vul | ♈

Moonfall

07:21:14 Many moons, one me

Vul
I'm not even the intended target and that hits

MLadySkylar

07:18:25 P'Sky/Sky-kun

Vul

Thank you,
Im just not interested in connecting with a total stranger who lives so far away.
He calls her my sister and I just responded with a by blood only

07:18:14 NRC/Raven

I have sooo many nail polishes ahhh and most of its old stuff

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July 6, 2018 02:35 AM

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Just trying out some semi-realistic fur practice

Critiques on lighting, blending, etc. are greatly appreciated. If you have suggestions on how to make it look more realistic, that's also greatly appreciated

https://s33.postimg.cc/6dgalc133/Fur_Practice.png

July 7, 2018 05:36 PM

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So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!

Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows

I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color

Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

July 7, 2018 05:51 PM

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Dragon's Fire said:
So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!
Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows
I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color
Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

I agree with both! For fur, I personally think that the most important thing is edge variation. Have very stark contrast as well, as right now, you have a lot of softer edges.

For color, instead of shading with black and white, try changing your hue variation! For wolves with white fur, try blue-tinted gray, cream, anything. For wolves with cream fur, try shading with a reddish-brown. Of course, these are only like two in a billion examples lol

Another thing I think is important with fur is fur direction. Look at real wolves and see how their fur grows in like ten different directions.

These are only my personal observations on drawing fur. I like what you have going so far, you can do it!

July 7, 2018 08:12 PM

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Honestly I have no critique but this is awesome.On a real animal I think the color would be a little more varied though but I under stand you might have not added it because of it being practice.

July 7, 2018 10:18 PM