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 Taenau
09:01:30 Tae/DH Queen
Cres,
I was wondering;-;

Where do I go now??
 LeafClan
08:55:57 Leaf she/her
I am going to poof for a little bit to go get new glasses bye guys paws too you all!
 LeafClan
08:46:51 Leaf she/her
Pixles he is perfect!
 Vulpixles
08:45:14 Pixie, Vul | ♈
-WP Click-

I don't know if he's blue enough.
 LeafClan
08:38:52 Leaf she/her
I have named her Hells Newest Arrival!
Please give my Girl paws and give paws to my HH wolf Entertaining Fire too!
 kycantina
08:37:44 no. 1 swamp defender
Ayy congrats Leaf!
 Caeruleum
08:36:35 Cae, Blue
congrats!!!
 LeafClan
08:36:12 Leaf she/her
Cae I have A Viti 3!
 Caeruleum
08:35:08 Cae, Blue
lets go ky, you got this!! :D
 Caeruleum
08:34:50 Cae, Blue
leaf, thank you ^^

man, i need that "in raffle?" option in barter to be a yes/no dropdown and not a checkbox, i wanna see stuff for SALE only, and NOT for raffle >:(
 kycantina
08:33:44 no. 1 swamp defender
off to a great start
-WP Click-
 LeafClan
08:32:41 Leaf she/her
Cae I will leyt you know when ever I get any bald eagle feathers to help you!
 Caeruleum
08:30:36 Cae, Blue
oops, poofed to check out shoes LOL

tae, forest 2-5 was nerfed >.< no longer a good place to train, im afraid 😭
bald eagles :') got a shit ton of new keepers and i wanna rate them all
 kycantina
08:27:09 no. 1 swamp defender
I'm back, don't let me stop exploring until Arwen and Mordor are at DG ;-;
 LeafClan
08:09:36 Leaf she/her
Hi guys!
 Taenau
07:50:31 Tae/DH Queen
Cres,
I'm trapped in forest 2. These things can't handle much more Dx
Which Feathers?
 Caeruleum
07:48:48 Cae, Blue
star, hoping it stays good! i am, finally done with three days of puppy boom LOL

tae, im also stuck in explore lol, feather hunt is real 😭
 Taenau
07:45:26 Tae/DH Queen
Cres,
Pretty decent! Just getting some BE training in before I have to do some work. you?
 Star Tha AOD
07:45:06 i stalk chat (Star)
Cae
so far! i don't know about later though, how 'bout you?
 Caeruleum
07:43:27 Cae, Blue
morning tae! how are you doing, love?

morning star! hope youre having a good one ^^

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Need critics!November 4, 2017 10:49 PM


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So lately I've been trying to get out of drawing cartoony cats. I've been trying to add more detail (which i need work on ;;) But can someone give my picture some tips?

https://kyothered.deviantart.com/art/Eden-713461234?ga_submit_new=10%3A1509853258

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kyothered on DA ^^
Need critics!November 19, 2017 06:19 PM


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I love the style and colouring! I just think you need to work on the head shape as it looks a tad bit more canine than feline. Otherwise, amazing work!
Need critics!December 18, 2017 08:16 PM


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Needs whiskers and the snout thingy looks too canine-ish
Need critics!December 29, 2017 04:10 PM


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The snout needs to be a little less narrow and much smaller. The ears might have to be a little bit bigger. Other than that it's pretty awesome! ^-^
Need critics!December 29, 2017 05:53 PM


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The way the fur goes on the neck - there's a part where it parts a little unnaturally, like somebody's parted it with a comb. Unless they're a housecat, I suggest that you fix that. I assume that you mean for the eyes to be shaped that way, since it's a cartoon-style drawing, but still, maybe they should be rotated more south-westward. As others have said, the snout is not a feline's; it lacks the whisker points, jowls, and softer/fatter jawline of a feline. Perhaps the ears should be a little more pointy. But all in all, it's pretty good! The coloring and background flatter the shape nicely, and said colors don't contrast overall, so it finishes cleanly. Just work on the anatomy a little more, and it would overall be pretty perfect.

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