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Holy cow. I could not. XDD

That is so impressive honestly.

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Ooof I can barely follow DnD. That--oof. That'd lose me so fast.

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Oooh that's fun! I'd definitely be the type of person to need the turn card. I get lost so much.
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yeah we got him his first one and I walked him through my entire main deck (to which he is terrified to play against) and slowly he is gaining an understanding of what to do. I need to get him the card that lays out the turn steps.
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That's impressive honestly. I'm just wondering XD

I know vaguely about MTG, haven't played it myself.
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Oh I have those too, but thankfully I do not see them often so it works out.

I have been playing MTG for over a year I think and have 10 different decks, plus I have knowledge of playing mono colour all the way to 5 colour decks. Why?
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For sure :0 Can I give you a nickname too then? It'd have to be later because I can't think of anything right now ^^"
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Ahh, I can do that. It's nice at least to get along with coworkers rather than having them be the bane of your existence.

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Help me/CritiqueJune 28, 2018 04:27 PM


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Something isn't settling well with me and this image... Could you guys help?

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Help me/CritiqueJune 29, 2018 08:42 PM


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You did a very good job, but I can see a few things that could be touched up on.

The cat's chest is facing us, but the entirety of it's side is visible. It's back wouldn't be able to twist like this so we should either see only part of the chest, or part of the side and back.

If you chose to keep the back instead of the front-facing chest, I would add a little more exaggeration to the back and maybe lose, or change, some of the fur detail. With cats, the elegant curve of the back is very noticeable.

If you decided to keep the front-facing chest, the back and hind legs would be behind it, though the curve would still be visible, of course.

The legs themselves are a little lumpy, compared to the graceful lines a cat has. The heels should be lower, and at a less extreme angle, while the knees would have a slightly shallower curve that blends gracefully into the body. The hindquarters could be rounder, and shorter to show where the hip bones are.

I've never been great with front-facing legs, but cats have slightly thicker, short forearms, usually. There might not be as deep a dip from shoulder to neck, and the most noticeable joint from the front of the leg would be the wrist curving slightly sloping outwards, thickening before becoming the paw.

The ears could be less rounded, though of course it depends on the breed or OC you were drawing. Cat ears are most often triangular, and I would set them a little higher up on the head while lengthening the cheeks. Cats have slightly round heads.

I would make the tail tuft thick and blend it into the tail more, rather than a separate piece of fur, but that one is more a personal preference.

I would love to draw little bits to visually represent my advice, but my tablet's too scratched up to pick up my pen, apparently. '-_- If I get it working again soon, I'll add some pics.

Edited at June 29, 2018 08:43 PM by The Watch

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