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The night walker The age is one of the things you need to look over, but there is also something missing in other. Once you correct those, just let me know! |
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I'm working on Kupua, I promise. Just struggling a bit, that's all. *^* |
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Moonlight wolf said:
Name: Esprit 'Whisp ' Woods Age: 14 Role: fledgling Abnormality type (Dog, cat, wolf, etc): cat Appearance: Whisp's long silky black hair is usually quite neat due to her habits of grooming/ brushing her hair. There are small brown and cream streaks in her hair but not very noticeable that it seems dyed or somebody realised she is an abnormal. Her cat like eyes are dark green with a golden ring around her pupils. Being tall and slender, Whisp is very agile and swift. Her nails are sharp like claws and her teeth are pointed like fangs. Whisp doesn't have a tail but cat ears that poke put through her hair on the top of her head. Luckily, she has found an easy solution to that and mostly wears hats or has her hood pulled up. If Whisp can't use a hat or hood, she waers her hair in a bun to cover her ears. Personality: Whisp is a quiet and shy girl who prefers to keep to herself. She has learnt to be wary and alert which can make her seem hostile but is a good friend when you get to know her. When you have earned her trust, she is very loyal and protective. Whisp is very soft and kind to her cat. Although you may be another abnormal, if they have canine abnormalities (dog,wolf,fox) she can be even more distrustful- this is more because of her cat instincts rather than not liking the actual person. Likes: sunshine Dislikes: rain, hunters Strengths (At least two): good balance, agile, fast, intelligent Weaknesses (At least two): insensitive and impatient Backstory: Whisp was born in a small village on the outskirts of a city. When her parents saw her abnormalities, they abandoned her in an alleyway in the city. She was found by a young man who had abnormalities too. He raised her and when she was 12, he left on a mission to find and save other abnormals. After waiting for one year, he didn't come back. Later on the news, an abnormal had been killed but a group managed to escape. It was her adoptive father who had died. Hunters invaded her home and Whisp, prepared for a situation like this, took what little she had and fled. While on the run, she found a real cat who became her friend. Eventually, she found a safe home with other abnormals. Other: Whisp has night vision. 7
I have fixed it now. |
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Moonlight wolf said:
Moonlight wolf said:
Name: Esprit 'Whisp ' Woods Age: 14 Role: fledgling Abnormality type (Dog, cat, wolf, etc): cat Appearance: Whisp's long silky black hair is usually quite neat due to her habits of grooming/ brushing her hair. There are small brown and cream streaks in her hair but not very noticeable that it seems dyed or somebody realised she is an abnormal. Her cat like eyes are dark green with a golden ring around her pupils. Being tall and slender, Whisp is very agile and swift. Her nails are sharp like claws and her teeth are pointed like fangs. Whisp doesn't have a tail but cat ears that poke put through her hair on the top of her head. Luckily, she has found an easy solution to that and mostly wears hats or has her hood pulled up. If Whisp can't use a hat or hood, she waers her hair in a bun to cover her ears. Personality: Whisp is a quiet and shy girl who prefers to keep to herself. She has learnt to be wary and alert which can make her seem hostile but is a good friend when you get to know her. When you have earned her trust, she is very loyal and protective. Whisp is very soft and kind to her cat. Although you may be another abnormal, if they have canine abnormalities (dog,wolf,fox) she can be even more distrustful- this is more because of her cat instincts rather than not liking the actual person. Likes: sunshine Dislikes: rain, hunters Strengths (At least two): good balance, agile, fast, intelligent Weaknesses (At least two): insensitive and impatient Backstory: Whisp was born in a small village on the outskirts of a city. When her parents saw her abnormalities, they abandoned her in an alleyway in the city. She was found by a young man who had abnormalities too. He raised her and when she was 12, he left on a mission to find and save other abnormals. After waiting for one year, he didn't come back. Later on the news, an abnormal had been killed but a group managed to escape. It was her adoptive father who had died. Hunters invaded her home and Whisp, prepared for a situation like this, took what little she had and fled. While on the run, she found a real cat who became her friend. Eventually, she found a safe home with other abnormals. Other: Whisp has night vision
I have fixed it. I hope it's alright now. Anything else?
Sorry! There's still something missing in other. Reread the rules please. |
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Moonlight wolf said:
Moonlight wolf said:
Name: Esprit 'Whisp ' Woods Age: 14 Role: fledgling Abnormality type (Dog, cat, wolf, etc): cat Appearance: Whisp's long silky black hair is usually quite neat due to her habits of grooming/ brushing her hair. There are small brown and cream streaks in her hair but not very noticeable that it seems dyed or somebody realised she is an abnormal. Her cat like eyes are dark green with a golden ring around her pupils. Being tall and slender, Whisp is very agile and swift. Her nails are sharp like claws and her teeth are pointed like fangs. Whisp doesn't have a tail but cat ears that poke put through her hair on the top of her head. Luckily, she has found an easy solution to that and mostly wears hats or has her hood pulled up. If Whisp can't use a hat or hood, she waers her hair in a bun to cover her ears. Personality: Whisp is a quiet and shy girl who prefers to keep to herself. She has learnt to be wary and alert which can make her seem hostile but is a good friend when you get to know her. When you have earned her trust, she is very loyal and protective. Whisp is very soft and kind to her cat. Although you may be another abnormal, if they have canine abnormalities (dog,wolf,fox) she can be even more distrustful- this is more because of her cat instincts rather than not liking the actual person. Likes: sunshine Dislikes: rain, hunters Strengths (At least two): good balance, agile, fast, intelligent Weaknesses (At least two): insensitive and impatient Backstory: Whisp was born in a small village on the outskirts of a city. When her parents saw her abnormalities, they abandoned her in an alleyway in the city. She was found by a young man who had abnormalities too. He raised her and when she was 12, he left on a mission to find and save other abnormals. After waiting for one year, he didn't come back. Later on the news, an abnormal had been killed but a group managed to escape. It was her adoptive father who had died. Hunters invaded her home and Whisp, prepared for a situation like this, took what little she had and fled. While on the run, she found a real cat who became her friend. Eventually, she found a safe home with other abnormals. Other: Whisp has night vision. 7
I have fixed it now.
I'm sure I have checked again. Please be right. |
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Accepted!
Moonlight wolf said:
Moonlight wolf said:
Moonlight wolf said:
Name: Esprit 'Whisp ' Woods Age: 14 Role: fledgling Abnormality type (Dog, cat, wolf, etc): cat Appearance: Whisp's long silky black hair is usually quite neat due to her habits of grooming/ brushing her hair. There are small brown and cream streaks in her hair but not very noticeable that it seems dyed or somebody realised she is an abnormal. Her cat like eyes are dark green with a golden ring around her pupils. Being tall and slender, Whisp is very agile and swift. Her nails are sharp like claws and her teeth are pointed like fangs. Whisp doesn't have a tail but cat ears that poke put through her hair on the top of her head. Luckily, she has found an easy solution to that and mostly wears hats or has her hood pulled up. If Whisp can't use a hat or hood, she waers her hair in a bun to cover her ears. Personality: Whisp is a quiet and shy girl who prefers to keep to herself. She has learnt to be wary and alert which can make her seem hostile but is a good friend when you get to know her. When you have earned her trust, she is very loyal and protective. Whisp is very soft and kind to her cat. Although you may be another abnormal, if they have canine abnormalities (dog,wolf,fox) she can be even more distrustful- this is more because of her cat instincts rather than not liking the actual person. Likes: sunshine Dislikes: rain, hunters Strengths (At least two): good balance, agile, fast, intelligent Weaknesses (At least two): insensitive and impatient Backstory: Whisp was born in a small village on the outskirts of a city. When her parents saw her abnormalities, they abandoned her in an alleyway in the city. She was found by a young man who had abnormalities too. He raised her and when she was 12, he left on a mission to find and save other abnormals. After waiting for one year, he didn't come back. Later on the news, an abnormal had been killed but a group managed to escape. It was her adoptive father who had died. Hunters invaded her home and Whisp, prepared for a situation like this, took what little she had and fled. While on the run, she found a real cat who became her friend. Eventually, she found a safe home with other abnormals. Other: Whisp has night vision. 7
I have fixed it now.
I'm sure I have checked again. Please be right.
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Crazydayz said:
Drunken seas You're still missing something in other! Re-read the rules to see.
I fixed it ;) |
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Accepted!
Drunken seas said:
Name Cryo - Age 16 - Role fledgling - Abnormality type Bull - Appearance Cyro stands at the height of 6'4 and has long cornidelantero horns on either side of his head, his hair is a shock of dark unnatural red, Cyro also seems to be cursed with a tail, with a puff of dark hair on the end. Cyro usually wears plain white jumpers and dark tracksuit pants, Cyro does not like to wear shoes that often unless he has to, Cyro is more of a humanoid figure aside from his bull features. Cyro has friendly aqua eyes with sharp features and a bronze complexion. Cyro has markings on his arms, they are mostly swirls and spots in a shade just a little darker then his skin, most cannot see it at first until they look closer. - Personality Cyro is quite a softy, but even Cyro doesn't trust himself, for around his area he is known to have a unpredictable temper, thanks to his bull traits. Cyro is good at keeping cool and collected, he has been practicing being mindful nearly his whole life. Cyro has quite the dark side when it comes to speaking about his past of any type, Cyro tends to not open up as much as he would like, as he likes to build walls. Cyro is quite a peaceful personality after a long long sun baking and enjoying nature.
- Likes Cyro like to sunbake quite often, and enjoy the wonderful sights of nature. He also enjoys a quiet afternoon in a library, or just books anywhere. - Dislikes Cyro dislikes the fact he cannot live with his human family without being judged, Cyro also dislikes being alone, as he is sure it's from his bull traits, being a herd animal. -
Strengths (At least two) - extraordinary hearing - protective ridges over the eyes (protects his eyes) - very muscular Weaknesses (At least two) - colour blind to red - scared of dogs of any kind - loud noises Backstory When Cyro was first born despite him being a bull looking creature, his mother faught to protect him, nurture him and help him, but his father was against him, saying things that should never been said to a child, Cyro eventually said goodbye to his mother and set off on his own, but he still misses his mother and siblings. Other 21 is Cyros favourite number! Cyro is gifted with a thick typical aussie accent and has a pet/ friend southern bobook owl that travels with him. Cyro is quite a free moving person, never really staying in one spot more then a night 7
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What should I write in my Other category? I have some deformities from the abnormality, a language she speaks, something she won't have. What else? |
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