Runner,

This is a semi Literate minimum RP. Which means you need much more than a single sentence for an appearance. Also your other section is almost entirely one long run on sentence which does not meet the requirements. You will also need to remove the Alpha Female portion of the rank so people aren't confused and think she is.

Your form has been rejected and will not be accepted. You've blatantly copied and thus plagiarized multiple people's characters in this RP.

Very Well.


Your Form, before you deleted it.
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Your Form, with the Copied Parts Highlighted & Bracketed
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For Specifics

Exhibit A

The Original

"Yours"

"Lastly, Isadora's hair is always short or medium length. Only hovering inches above the shoulders. Would she wear long hair? Well, that's future Isadora's decision. Her hair is thick and luscious, and the woman adores her locks and pays lots of money to tend to them. Just don't ask how much it all costs to keep it in a healthy condition. Her hair was originally a dark brown until her werewolf blood started to take over. Now it's a lighter brown, almost like an ashen color. The ends of the woman's hair are a creamish color, standing out somewhat from her hair. Isadora's hair type is in-between straight and wavy, with the top half straight as can be, but the ends curl slightly."

"Kendall's hair is always long. Falling right abouve Her lower back. Would She wear short hair? Well, that's future Kendall's decision, Her hair is thick and luscious, and the woman adores Her locks and pavs lots of monev to tend to them, Just don't ask how much it all costs to keep it in a healthy condition. Her hair was originally a dark blonde until her werewolf blood started to take over. Now it's a lighter blond, almost like an bleach color. The ends of the woman's hair are a creamish color, standing out somewhat from her hair. Kendal's hair type is in- between straight and curly, with the top half straight as can be, but the ends curl by alot."

Now while you did try to swap things out to make it "original" majority of it is copied word for word. This is Isadora, Tamesis' character located on Pg. 2

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Exhibit B

The Oirginal

"Yours"

"Roxanne is a female that is a true complexity to understand. One would never be able to know what she is thinking nor feeling. She keeps it all hidden to the point where she mainly keeps a straight face wherever she ventures off to. Completely unreadable, one could try unmasking her and fail. She does not smile, does not laugh, does not show any emotion, even if a situation is extremely dangerous. She is reclusive and reserved, not often speaking about herself nor giving off any information to do with her life or personality. Roxanne is a completely closed book that cannot be opened. Even towards any she considers friends, they will not know everything about her. She keeps her life subtle and to herself."

"Kendall is a female that is a true complexity to understand. One would never be able to know what she is thinking nor feeling. She keeps it all hidden to the point where she mainly keeps a straight face wherever she ventures off to. Completely unreadable, one could try unmasking her and fail. She does not smile, does not laugh, does not show any emotion, even if a situation is extremely dangerous. She is reclusive and reserved, not often speaking about herself nor giving off any information to do with her life or personality. Kendall isa completely closed book that cannot be opened. Even towards any she considers friends, they will not know everything about her. She keeps her life subtle and to herself, She also makes sure to stand up for Her pack but usually She gets brought right back down to where She started, She has a high strong spirit and doesn't take any crap."

Aside from changing the name and a few words, again, it's word for word. The only thing original in yours is the half of the very last sentence, and that is it. The original version belongs to Tenebris Umbra's Character, Roxanne, on Page 1.


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Exhibit C

The Original

"Yours"

"Klotho can be flirty, most definitely. Does she want to settle down? Probably not, but will she flirt with people? Yes, absolutely. But, if she were to ever claim someone as her own, she would be the border of protective and possessive, just as she is of her possessions and her places, and the possessions and places of her friends. Telling someone when they've crossed a boundary isn't a fear of hers, and she'll gladly do so on behalf of her friends, too."

"Kendall can be flirty, most definitely. But does She want to settle down? Probably so, but will she flirt with people? Somtimes. But, if She were to ever claim someone as Her own, She would be the border of protective and possessive, just as She is of Her possessions and Her places, and the possessions and places of Her friends. Telling someone when they've crossed a boundary isn't a fear of hers, and she'll gladly do so on behalf of her friends, too."

Again, aside from changing the name and a few words, they are word for word. The Original one belongs to Polly's Character, Klotho, on Page 2.


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Keep in mind, all of these characters were finished and accepted prior to you even reserving, which means I had read them before you even created Kendall.

Now, I could absolutely go and do a line for line examination between the two, and I'm sure I'd find a few differences like grammatical or spelling errors, or a slight change in words, however, at the end of the day, I would argue that what you posted for your Appearance and Personality were 95% someone else's work, which is considered Plagiarism.

I think I've said enough and made my point. This is not what my Sign Up form is, so, please, feel free to go ahead and take your leave.

EDIT: I went ahead and highlighted everything that is the same between the two for each exhibit so the comparison is easier seen.

Res Beta for Lunar Falls Pack please