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I don't want Sv pups apparently I want defect pups..
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Hollow,
Many people suffer from anxiety and know how to deal with it. I do.
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Icemoons
That's a really weird and kinda concerning way to start a conversation. Maybe next time leave that "I'm an expert on anxiety" out of your message?
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hi guys, Prudy Im an expert on anxiety, take some deep breaths, what time are you going to get the boot off?
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Sounds about right lol. I plan to bread my DH and SV boosts together but I doubt I'll get either boost often
 purdy
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I'm getting off my boot today and they might have to rebreak my foot:p
 binders united
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I bred TWO ExW and ExH and Obedient wolves and they failed to produce me a ExW OR ExH
 binders united
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It gives you motivation to go and do the quests. before, I just explored and hope I finished a quest
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I put myself up in the leaves game so you can see :)

Yeah, I like the update too! So many tokens for the halloween boost in wolf part haha
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they changed quests? I like the new version
 Urux
06:16:52 Urox
Leaves are for a fall event. You get them sometimes when you go on a wolf's page. Each one will have a number, you can use them in a leaves PvP. Go to Realm > Games > Leaves and place your pack up there and someone will accept ^^ You have to get the highest number :P
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what does a leaf do?

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Critique on thisMay 15, 2018 02:12 PM


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https://s9.postimg.cc/u0o0j78j3/Untitled412.png
Any improvements I can make? :/

Edited at May 15, 2018 02:13 PM by Cún.
Critique on thisMay 16, 2018 12:44 AM


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The tail and back leg are extremely strange and I can't quite figure out what's going on there. XD

Also, instead of two sitting poses, I'd add one that clearly shows a side view.

Edited at May 16, 2018 12:45 AM by Lykotia
Critique on thisMay 16, 2018 01:57 AM


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Lykotia said:
The tail and back leg are extremely strange and I can't quite figure out what's going on there. XD

Also, instead of two sitting poses, I'd add one that clearly shows a side view.


I haven't a clue what I did either. It's so cringy for other players to notice :')

Thanks for the help. :D
Critique on thisMay 20, 2018 12:26 PM


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Um... maybe make the lower jaw line up a bit more with the upper jaw. Otherwise it kinda looks like an overbite. Hope that helps a bit.
Critique on thisMay 20, 2018 12:27 PM


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Hunters said:
Um... maybe make the lower jaw line up a bit more with the upper jaw. Otherwise it kinda looks like an overbite. Hope that helps a bit.

Thanks, anything is helpful x'D
Critique on thisMay 20, 2018 08:40 PM


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I think it looks really good, but the head looks a tad big for the body, and didnÂ’t quite flow well into it. Other than that, awesome job!
Critique on thisMay 21, 2018 01:52 AM


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Cutting Edge said:
I think it looks really good, but the head looks a tad big for the body, and didn't quite flow well into it. Other than that, awesome job!

>.< Thanks!
Critique on thisMay 21, 2018 02:28 AM


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The back legs are a bit too stretched out to be a natural position, and it looks like the tail is coming off of the back leg. A line there to separate the tail from the leg would help it look less off. ^^

Edited at May 21, 2018 02:29 AM by Evee4ever228
Critique on thisMay 21, 2018 09:53 AM


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Evee4ever228 said:
The back legs are a bit too stretched out to be a natural position, and it looks like the tail is coming off of the back leg. A line there to separate the tail from the leg would help it look less off. ^^

Thanks a lot ^-^

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