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 Lunnar moon
03:46:28 
why are you so young someone who canÂ’t spell now right might be under 10
 Forest Dwelling
03:46:05 I am on Wolflocke ok
My pack happiness is driving me crazy. I need to see it at 100 again but this damn pup I bought for 500 mush is dragging it down >.>
 Amygdala
03:45:48 Amy/Anpmygdala
Star
You need to be carefull anywhere you go XD

But i agree. Especially need to be carefull about hidden cameras
 Lunnar moon
03:44:38 
no I just canÂ’t write my wolf memorials without the A mark on my page
 Serpents
03:44:05 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
@luna ?
 Castiel
03:44:00 Cas (He/They)
naw one my classmates looked at my screen earlier and called my avatar a wolf XD
 Falling Stars
03:43:50 star, she/they
Amy
yeah you have to be careful about where you stay too. Some places over there are pretty shady
 Amygdala
03:43:48 Amy/Anpmygdala
Defiant
I am sure it will be better. That one has enough bad luck already
 Falling Stars
03:43:08 star, she/they
-WP Click-

I just remembered he was HW and hero-
 Serpents
03:42:58 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
Ah new blood not read Rules I'm off to the corner
 Amygdala
03:42:53 Amy/Anpmygdala
Star
I know 🥲
But i see so many beautifull places all over tik tok. I think the biggest issue is the plane ticket. The actuall food and apartment should not be that bad
 Nez.ity
03:42:49 LF: Simple roleplay
Get red ;0
 Defiant Rescue
03:42:45 Alex//Chim Hoarder
Amy
Oh I agree. XD I don't understand it either, I've been working on him for a while now. I hope the pup I have will be better next game year for this stuff. *-* Otherwise it would be 2 wolves full of bad luck.
 Voxtexy
03:42:19 Vox
Ahh, smart punctuation.

I got the first half but could not remember the 2nd for the life of me
 Eternity
03:42:16 ET
rid of* whoops
 Voxtexy
03:41:57 Vox
That's your device that's doing it. Should be a setting you can change, I cannot remember what it's called
 Lunnar moon
03:41:56 
Ok Fine
 Eternity
03:41:54 ET
Lunnar Moon
Turn off 'smart punctuation' in your device settings if you'd like to get red of the weird A :]
 Lunnar moon
03:41:31 
like when you put down a quotation mark
 Amygdala
03:41:11 Amy/Anpmygdala
Defiant
Yay XD
Althou i think if sunfire had full cp he would win. I have no idea why your wolf is not that good.

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Constructive Criticism on human art?April 4, 2021 09:25 PM


Luck

Darkseeker
 
Posts: 3575
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Heyo! I just recently got into drawing human art, since before now I've only drawn feral animals and furries :)
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I have a W.I.P peice of one of my human characters that I think looks really good, but you guys are much better artists than I'll ever be, so I'd like to hear your opinions on it! ^^ (post images isn't being the best right now so you'll have to click the link to see it :<)

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Edited at April 4, 2021 09:26 PM by Toby
Constructive Criticism on human art?April 6, 2021 09:52 AM


Zeraphia

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It does look pretty good, the coloring is solid, the anatomy is pretty much all there. It's a wonderful chibi-type style. If I were to adjust anything really, it'd be to make the glasses / goggles either a bit bigger (a little more cartoonishI guess lol) to help the eyes be a bit more visible. But that's just a personal preference.
Constructive Criticism on human art?May 10, 2021 02:49 AM


Former Pack

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I like that you have a strong direction for your personal style.
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The thing that throws me is the angles. The best way that I can explain this is by showing, so I took your drawing, lowered the opacity, and drew on the centerlines. Everything except the face is viewed straight on. The face, based on where the eyes are (and the bridge of the glasses), is turned. But the other facial features, ears, hair, and hair bow don't turn with the head.
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Edited at May 10, 2021 02:50 AM by Barlow

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