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 SpiritGuardian
01:06:54 Mr palette guy
disty,
I mean- actually Ill try art again.
I got a good feeling about this year (if it happens)
 distant-screams
01:05:09 katy | beetle
spirit,
haha, i feel that!

cas,
thank you! ^^
 Castiel
01:04:10 Cas (He/They)
distant

I love you palette and avatar
 SpiritGuardian
01:03:59 Mr palette guy
disty,
Yeah Ima go with apples and dyes this year. easier on my wrist.
 Caeruleum
01:03:48 Cae, Blue
Gwyn ap Nudd 1 drops Charon's Blessing and you pick it up.

lets pray it doesnt get stolen before tomorrow :')
 distant-screams
01:02:53 katy | beetle
spirit,
i wanted to do art last year but i ended up getting busy and just sending them some dyes and apples instead ^^'
 SpiritGuardian
01:01:17 Mr palette guy
disty,
i think posti is down at the moment, But I did some art for last art Secret santa, wont again lmao
 Falling Stars
01:00:26 star, she/they
i drew with a mouse for my entire coding club and they thought i was so cool
 distant-screams
12:59:22 katy | beetle
spirit,
lmao makes sense xD i can't imagine drawing with a mouse though, sounds tough
 Falling Stars
12:58:18 star, she/they
i hate being anemic. i guess it lets me know when i need to eat pretty efficiently though :,)
 SpiritGuardian
12:58:12 Mr palette guy
disty,
ah BJake taught me how to use the wacom so now i cant do art with a mouse, and he might shank me if I touch his stuff >->"
 distant-screams
12:58:10 katy | beetle
i also broke my curse today, weird! i was stuck at 353-354 for a while (kept loosing paws and then gaining them), but i'm finally at 356
 SpiritGuardian
12:57:29 Mr palette guy
Pumpkin king,
I used to be on at strange hours but not anymore lol
 distant-screams
12:57:09 katy | beetle
spirit,
lol <3 you should definitely pick up art again though, it's such a fun pass time even if you aren't profiting from it!
 The Pumpkin King
12:56:56 
Definitely. I just kind of passively collect them by being in chat at weird hours. haha
 SpiritGuardian
12:56:25 Mr palette guy
oh shit I might be able to catch up to you pumpkin king :0
 The Pumpkin King
12:55:55 
I finally broke the curse of 391 paws, lol.

Sometimes you just get stuck at a number for the longest and it's so weird. xD
 SpiritGuardian
12:55:53 Mr palette guy
disty,
No don't cryy ):
 distant-screams
12:55:14 katy | beetle
spirit,
awh that's such a nice thing to say :'D be right back i'll be crying LMAO
 Boeing
12:54:34 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Eci
That is... a good explanation as to why that happened xD
Oh well lol

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Constructive Criticism on human art?April 4, 2021 09:25 PM


Luck

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Heyo! I just recently got into drawing human art, since before now I've only drawn feral animals and furries :)
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I have a W.I.P peice of one of my human characters that I think looks really good, but you guys are much better artists than I'll ever be, so I'd like to hear your opinions on it! ^^ (post images isn't being the best right now so you'll have to click the link to see it :<)

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Edited at April 4, 2021 09:26 PM by Toby
Constructive Criticism on human art?April 6, 2021 09:52 AM


Zeraphia

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It does look pretty good, the coloring is solid, the anatomy is pretty much all there. It's a wonderful chibi-type style. If I were to adjust anything really, it'd be to make the glasses / goggles either a bit bigger (a little more cartoonishI guess lol) to help the eyes be a bit more visible. But that's just a personal preference.
Constructive Criticism on human art?May 10, 2021 02:49 AM


Former Pack

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I like that you have a strong direction for your personal style.
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The thing that throws me is the angles. The best way that I can explain this is by showing, so I took your drawing, lowered the opacity, and drew on the centerlines. Everything except the face is viewed straight on. The face, based on where the eyes are (and the bridge of the glasses), is turned. But the other facial features, ears, hair, and hair bow don't turn with the head.
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Edited at May 10, 2021 02:50 AM by Barlow

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