Wolf Play : Price? And Critique my Art.( Daily thing...II guess)
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 Angry Cupcake
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Rp?
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 Caeruleum
03:22:42 Cae, Blue
eno, went from a bit past my shoulder to around my jaw :D hold on, i have a pic of all the hair on the floor XD
oooh, pasta! yummy yummy *^*

ayo?? october broski??? mine is a few days later! :D
 Hallow's Eve
03:21:45 Hallow, Eve
Love the new pelt! Time to make it work though with a custom
 limbo
03:21:37 ZD
yeah i watch youtube alongside playing, it works perfect. it's just wp, happens on mobile too
 limbo
03:21:08 ZD
STS,
woah, i hope you see the results of that elsewhere at least :0

Amy,
no worries lol. see ya <3
 STS
03:20:32 TS, Speckles
The speed doesnt seem to be helping sadly. its only Wolfplay it does it on, every other website is fine, such as Youtube and Google.
 Amygdala
03:19:50 Amy/Anpmygdala
Limbo
I need a pvp break XD

I will be back in around 30 minutes
 STS
03:19:44 TS, Speckles
Limbo. Yes I know how you feel, I even upgraded my internet to full fibre, because it was available in my area. I am getting 800+ speed (Im in the UK) which is a first for me.
 Rogue Whispers
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Paws?
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 Eno
03:19:17 
Crescendo,
Ooh that's fun! Did you cut alot off? I'm making dinner at the moment, we're having pasta :D

Also super excited since the WP event lands on my birthday *^*

I just love gambling
 Rogue Whispers
03:18:54 Rogue is a Ghost
Bootiful doge <3
 limbo
03:18:47 ZD
STS,
I see :0 I thought i was the only one, no one seems to have this issue for the months that i've had it lol, so i assumed it was an issue on my end ^^;
 STS
03:18:09 TS, Speckles
Cres. Hello ^^
 Caeruleum
03:17:49 Cae, Blue
ts <33
 Caeruleum
03:17:37 Cae, Blue
eno, doing good, thanks! got a haircut today :D
hows you, love?
 STS
03:16:46 TS, Speckles
Limbo, I have been having issues for a while now since Eve changed the server, its a real shame,
 Malcuth
03:16:10 Wander
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Handsome dog alert :)
 Eno
03:15:41 
got me 50k mush for the event *^*

Crescendo <3
How're you going?
 limbo
03:15:33 ZD
anyone else encountering issues with lag? the only solution i've found is disconnecting wifi and re-connecting, otherwise i can be stuck loading for 30+ minutes ;--;
 Demon Mistress
03:15:15 The Scary Mod
@Cae
Awh it was a joke but thank you ^^

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Price? And Critique my Art.( Daily thing...II guess)June 28, 2019 10:24 AM


greywind

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never give up on making art <3 do what you like, I would like to guide you with fur style but im still trying to make fur styles right now xD

never listen to what people tell you about how your art is 'bad' it's amazing ^^
Price? And Critique my Art.( Daily thing...II guess)July 15, 2019 01:47 PM


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Update. Now taking some more Critique

I'm always gonna reuse this thread. For my personal reasons...haha.

Art that needs some harsh words/inspiring.( Note that I will stop using this for at least 2 weeks and come back :) )

Hurry Commission

https://i.postimg.cc/zBqNMhmH/Hurry-Commissiondone.jpg

I was free styling/Testing the brushes

https://i.postimg.cc/SK3LhRBy/200024.jpg

Drew this for DA
https://i.postimg.cc/kgZRVZfs/DA-Drawing.jpg

Not in order...I just like these ones so I picked them out. And since their like a huge scenery and whatnot ;\

Edited at July 15, 2019 01:48 PM by Bilx
Price? And Critique my Art.( Daily thing...II guess)July 15, 2019 03:22 PM


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It looks great and you certainly have improved! The first and second pictures are amazing and I would love to commission you sometime soon, but for the third picture you still have that sort of out of proportion head and stiff legs, maybe thicken out and add a bit of fluff to the neck there?
And I'm unsure if the animal is a canine or feline, a feline would better fit in with a pose like that because their bodies tend to be a bit slimmer than a canine's would be.

Edited at July 15, 2019 03:23 PM by Painted Wolves
Price? And Critique my Art.( Daily thing...II guess)July 15, 2019 03:24 PM


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@Painted

UGH! I know...I only like it since it's a new OC of mines. And since it's a hybrid between a vampire/winged wolf. But thank you really for the feedback <3
Price? And Critique my Art.( Daily thing...II guess)July 15, 2019 03:28 PM


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Bilx said:
@Painted

UGH! I know...I only like it since it's a new OC of mines. And since it's a hybrid between a vampire/winged wolf. But thank you really for the feedback <3


Vampire wolf is pretty creative, what art program do you currently use? If you use MediBang I may be able to help you with fur and whatnot
Price? And Critique my Art.( Daily thing...II guess)July 15, 2019 03:31 PM


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That first one has a super nice and dynamic pose though I can recommend varying the fur a little more. Try having some going in different directions or looking at fur direction on wolves/dogs. There are several images you can find online which are super helpful. Having some fur sticking up in different directions can really help give some move movement and texture to your art.

You seem to be doing the same type/ear positioning, I can suggest trying some new ones which can often help to aid expression.

Overall it's looking really good!
Price? And Critique my Art.( Daily thing...II guess)July 15, 2019 04:02 PM


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Painted Wolves said:


Bilx said:
@Painted

UGH! I know...I only like it since it's a new OC of mines. And since it's a hybrid between a vampire/winged wolf. But thank you really for the feedback <3


Vampire wolf is pretty creative, what art program do you currently use? If you use MediBang I may be able to help you with fur and whatnot

I use Kleki.

Orbit said:
That first one has a super nice and dynamic pose though I can recommend varying the fur a little more. Try having some going in different directions or looking at fur direction on wolves/dogs. There are several images you can find online which are super helpful. Having some fur sticking up in different directions can really help give some move movement and texture to your art.

You seem to be doing the same type/ear positioning, I can suggest trying some new ones which can often help to aid expression.

Overall it's looking really good!


Thanks. I'll try that.

Edited at July 15, 2019 04:03 PM by Bilx
Price? And Critique my Art.( Daily thing...II guess)July 20, 2019 05:56 PM


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NEW goal

I can't shade ;-;. I use different layers to get the lightening right and I might even use 2 layers. But there's always something wrong...


Also on eyes how do I make them look more...open and clear. Like bright :)
Price? And Critique my Art.( Daily thing...II guess)July 30, 2019 11:35 PM


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Sevoth said:
NEW goal

I can't shade ;-;. I use different layers to get the lightening right and I might even use 2 layers. But there's always something wrong...


Also on eyes how do I make them look more...open and clear. Like bright :)


I can definitely help out with the shading ;)
I use fire alpaca, and for my shading, I don't add/rarely highlights, I do it all based off shadows.
I make a new layer set on multiply, and try to figure out where I want to light to come from. I then draw the shading the opposite from that and blur it a ton so it fades out. I then do the same with a new layer, but set it on add and go from where the light shines on. It would look something like this
https://i.postimg.cc/2yb291PV/beeandbadger.png
which is pretty alright for beginning I suppose, but it can end up making them look shiny rather than fluffy or textured.
https://s22.postimg.cc/p4udbaj35/lolsurfsupdone.png
To really add detail, like this piece,
(Which looks a little awkward face-wise X'D)
https://i.postimg.cc/ncrqktSM/donez.png
I erase small stripes/pieces where the light would shine, in the multiply layer, and gradually blend them back in. This makes for decent fur texture but is time-consuming.
Since I use Firealpaca I use the watercolor brush for this, set on the lowest opacity, though I've also done it with the smudge tool and it worked pretty well. It also took me months to finally get this down, just keep experimenting and trying different things.
Even cell shading can look really nice on a small clean piece

Edited at July 30, 2019 11:38 PM by Wilverbeast
Price? And Critique my Art.( Daily thing...II guess)July 30, 2019 11:57 PM


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Your artwork is off to a fabulous start. Let me give you a few pointers!
Most of it will come to you with practice. :) Be loose, vary your line weight.

Here's a redline!
https://i.postimg.cc/xjhWbQjm/784534-DA-EAB8-49-E6-8-EFE-7-F1-D3-DF1-C127.png
https://i.postimg.cc/jdfBH1CF/B6-F67446-B01-B-40-E9-AED0-8-BBDC654-FE57.png


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