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Critique my Art ^^February 2, 2019 09:45 AM


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Deja Vu said:
Well my favorite part about your art is that it's so unique. I would keep most of your style, but maybe tweak a few things.

I agree with mavi, I think you should make fur and shadows more prominent! Maybe experiment with lighting too. I've found that lighting can definitely make a piece a ton better. If the sun is behind the characters, add a brim of light around their fur.

Use references when practicing! It's the only way to improve your anatomy. I know for me whenever I'm stuck between styles ,I get a bunch of pictures of a bunch of animals and just doodle a bunch of em. Some realistic things can transfer over to your current art style. Don't forget to credit though. ;')

Last thing, regularly practice realism! It's will really help with everything, I promise.

All that being said, you're one of my favorite artists. Hope this helps !



Thank you so so much! The last comment means a lot coming from you as you're one of my favourites. <3

I'll make sure to practise with the tips you gave me! Thanks so much again!
Critique my Art ^^February 2, 2019 09:51 AM


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ASomeonePerson said:
You've improved greatly since you've started posting your art in the Art Gallery, and the drawing you made for me of Ezhno was very beautiful, but I've noticed that you're beginning to struggle with drawing, and, even though I'm not an artist, I have some tips to help you improve:

1 Study the anatomy of what you are drawing. Since you typically draw canines, I'd suggest you study the entire (note, the entire) anatomy of a canine. Study the bone structure, the muscles, the skin, and the way the fur covers the body. Specifically, learn the skeletal system and the muscular system since these are the most important.

2 Experiment with different brushes with every drawing and see what suits it best. I've learned over the past few days of studying, most artists use five or six, if not only two or one, brushes to make the most perfect masterpieces, so keep the number of brushes you use to a minimum and experiment during beginning sketches.

3 Go to fellow artists and learn their techniques. I recommend checking out a user known as "Chickenbusiness" on DeviantArt. She has a Free Resources tab where you can see her techniques. Here's the link to that page: https://www.deviantart.com/chickenbusiness/gallery/42525407/Resources




Edited at February 2, 2019 09:51 AM by ASomeonePerson
Critique my Art ^^February 2, 2019 09:54 AM


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ASomeonePerson said:
You've improved greatly since you've started posting your art in the Art Gallery, and the drawing you made for me of Ezhno was very beautiful, but I've noticed that you're beginning to struggle with drawing, and, even though I'm not an artist, I have some tips to help you improve:

1 Study the anatomy of what you are drawing. Since you typically draw canines, I'd suggest you study the entire (note, the entire) anatomy of a canine. Study the bone structure, the muscles, the skin, and the way the fur covers the body. Specifically, learn the skeletal system and the muscular system since these are the most important.

2 Experiment with different brushes with every drawing and see what suits it best. I've learned over the past few days of studying, most artists use five or six, if not only two or one, brushes to make the most perfect masterpieces, so keep the number of brushes you use to a minimum and experiment during beginning sketches.

3 Go to fellow artists and learn their techniques. I recommend checking out a user known as "Chickenbusiness" on DeviantArt. She has a Free Resources tab where you can see her techniques. Here's the link to that page: https://www.deviantart.com/chickenbusiness/gallery/42525407/Resources


I am so so sorry I didn't see this!! ;n;

Thank you very much! Those tips are greatly appreciated. I have a doggo at home and I'll study her closely, and i'll study other woofers, too ^^

I'll definitely check Chickenbusiness out!! Thanks again!<3
Critique my Art ^^February 2, 2019 01:13 PM


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I don't really know what to say, because you already know how much I adore your work.

I agree with a few people here about the snouts, but it isn't a very large problem in my eyes! I believe they suit your style.

And I just have another small thing. Sometimes your leg bends awkwardly, but it isn't like always? I have that problem myself with poses etc, so I wouldn't worry about it. Practise makes perfect, as you've already said lmao.

All in all I love you & your art oof.

Edited at February 2, 2019 01:13 PM by Xeno
Critique my Art ^^February 2, 2019 01:15 PM


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Xeno said:
I don't really know what to say, because you already know how much I adore your work.

I agree with a few people here about the snouts, but it isn't a very large problem in my eyes! I believe they suit your style.

And I just have another small thing. Sometimes your leg bends awkwardly, but it isn't like always? I have that problem myself with poses etc, so I wouldn't worry about it. Practise makes perfect, as you've already said lmao.

All in all I love you & your art oof.


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