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04:57:44 stalker or stalk :)

Polar-
dude.

that's... wow. i'd probably pass out from fear lmaoo

yeah hopefully :,D praying for you lol.

anyway, gotta dip soon, but i'll see ya around! nice talking. :) hope stuff gets better for you!

Polargeist

04:57:39 Chro (he/him)

Zera -
God the day I switch to Imgbb is the day I die 🙄
Yeah man, I went to bed around 3AM or 4AM Finnish time last night and I can't sleep well in my sister's apartment so I woke up 10. Am free tomorrow so I got one day to fix it before I have to get up at 7AM again gsdhmrm wish me luck

Polargeist

04:55:51 Chro (he/him)

Stalk -
It's. Um. The wasp's nest. In my roof 👀
But uh from the bright side they should be dead about now since it's so cold outside so hopefully there won't be any more of them ?? Maybe.?

Feiella

04:55:11 Fei The Sleepy Ghost

Nux
How are you?

Zeraphia

04:54:55 Vah is Spooky

Y'all can use Imgbb

It still works XD

Zeraphia

04:54:35 Vah is Spooky

Polar

Oh man! That's not fun at all.

Sleep schedules do a lot for us, it's almost surprising.

le stalk

04:53:42 stalker or stalk :)

Polar-
Yeppp you get it :')

oh my god 😭 that sucks?? was it just the region you were in had a lot of wasps or something?

Polargeist

04:53:15 Chro (he/him)

I sawww ugh I can never post to my gallery when I want 👎

~♥Nux♥~

04:53:02 I eat souls, nom nom

Heya Fei :)

Luna👻

04:51:59 Silver (She/her)

I would post a palette but Postimage is down again XD

Luna👻

04:51:27 Silver (She/her)

hi chat

teddy

04:51:23 its yellow

-WP Click- please vote!

Polargeist

04:51:08 Chro (he/him)

Zera -
Hahah nono I wrote it before seeing your response and I couldn't possibly write it all twice 💔 the laziness took over

A tad bit! Gonna be burning through it as soon as possible, but it'll have to be tomorrow cause I really gotta go to bed :'D messed up my sleep schedule real bad

Polargeist

04:47:47 Chro (he/him)

Stalk -
Ooh that must be such a relief, having owed art is such a pain cause you still wanna make it good but the pressure is so stressful :')
Oh yeah, both stung me on my head while I was sleeping </3 wonderful alarm. For 3AM. But pshhh thug it out am I right

Zeraphia

04:46:55 Vah is Spooky

Polar

I am old and blind pffft

But hey that is fantastic! Have you gotten to read any of it yet?

Polargeist

04:46:00 Chro (he/him)

Zera -
Hahah like I said in my other reply pretty busy the last two weeks but hopefully it's calming down soon! Looking forward to writing more soon and also got my hands on an Aztec mythology book YAY

le stalk

04:45:42 stalker or stalk :)

Polar-
Yeah I hope so as well lol. Luckily I finished up some owed art though, so I'm glad for that!
Real with being eventful, but oh god 2 wasps? That must hurt man, sounds pretty painful. D:
good to hear you're back home though, that's always nice!

Feiella

04:44:55 Fei The Sleepy Ghost

hey Nux

Sheep Guardian

04:43:54 Guarder of the Sheep

Stalk
No, but I will in a few months. Three? Two? Four? I'm not sure. I was just practicing.

~♥Nux♥~

04:43:42 I eat souls, nom nom

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

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July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

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July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

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July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

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July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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