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 Blind Bat
03:43:01 I Am Vengeance
I wish my two pregnant girls would go into labor
 le stalk
03:41:33 stalker or stalk :)
ayy that looks super cool Ollie :)
 Qyusen
03:37:07 Qyu - all pronouns
Ollie- i adore the design and coloring :O
 Mistress Nyx
03:36:51 
I just took a steaming shower. It felt very good.
 Malcuth
03:36:03 Wander
Wow those are so cool! I love the markings! Your cats are super cute too
 Malcuth
03:35:38 Wander
Ollie
Thank you!
Stalk
Yeah that's why I'm using it, I usually use post image too! Thank you !!
 Faulty Demons
03:35:24 Ollie, Gold
I turned my cats into people, what do you guys think?
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 Faulty Demons
03:34:41 Ollie, Gold
Le Stalk
Yeah. It's very annoying.
 le stalk
03:34:03 stalker or stalk :)
anyway yeah Malcuth, looks super cool! :0 love the way you do fur
 Pack King
03:33:39 Lauren | PK
95 predators in swamp is so yummy
 Faulty Demons
03:33:24 Ollie, Gold
Wander
That looks amazing!
 le stalk
03:33:22 stalker or stalk :)
bro i keep forgetting that imgbb is an option for image hosting

postimg is down right now lol
 Malcuth
03:32:18 Wander
Thoughts on this? I literally just started shading so xD
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 Boeing
03:17:16 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Will
it's getting better but not enough lol
 EkaterinaGoldstone
03:16:56 Kate/Gold
Aw nuts. My new general quest from Gullin is to breed a Tortie pup, but I don't have any Tortie in my pack to work that easier.
 Spookybeast
03:15:51 Will
@Boe

Oh damn 😭
Yeah I don't know anything about international systems
 Boeing
03:12:39 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Will
Our bus network has 30 routes and not nearly enough frequency for 500,000 people. wooo love new zealand
 Boeing
03:11:50 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Amt
It's 9am so I have a bit of time to get better at Slither
We need to put ourselves on more of the leaderboard lol
 Spookybeast
03:11:40 Will
@Boe

Part of it may be that my city is the capital / our public transit goes across the whole state
Funky stuff here :'D

@Etea

I will I will *^*
Honestly if I didn't get sketch vibes I would've struck up a conversation lmao
 Amygdala
03:11:19 Amy/Anpmygdala
Plane
No idea...but you still have half the day to get better at it XD

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Critique?July 6, 2018 02:35 AM


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Just trying out some semi-realistic fur practice

Critiques on lighting, blending, etc. are greatly appreciated. If you have suggestions on how to make it look more realistic, that's also greatly appreciated

https://s33.postimg.cc/6dgalc133/Fur_Practice.png
Critique?July 7, 2018 05:36 PM


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So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!
Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows
I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color
Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!
Critique?July 7, 2018 05:51 PM


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Dragon's Fire said:
So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!
Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows
I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color
Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!



I agree with both! For fur, I personally think that the most important thing is edge variation. Have very stark contrast as well, as right now, you have a lot of softer edges.

For color, instead of shading with black and white, try changing your hue variation! For wolves with white fur, try blue-tinted gray, cream, anything. For wolves with cream fur, try shading with a reddish-brown. Of course, these are only like two in a billion examples lol

Another thing I think is important with fur is fur direction. Look at real wolves and see how their fur grows in like ten different directions.

These are only my personal observations on drawing fur. I like what you have going so far, you can do it!
Critique?July 7, 2018 08:12 PM


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Honestly I have no critique but this is awesome.On a real animal I think the color would be a little more varied though but I under stand you might have not added it because of it being practice.
Critique?July 7, 2018 10:18 PM


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x3 I haven't tried putting colored edges on a practice, I might just do that. Thanks guys >^<

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