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 Zeraphia
10:28:55 Vah is less okay
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I love it so much, Ollie.

I want to just... I want to touch it.
 Faulty Demons
10:28:13 Ollie, Gold
Thoughts? I tried out a bunch of new stuff, so it's definately not perfect, but generally speaking does it look okay?
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 Zeraphia
10:26:43 Vah is less okay
Oof we don't want floods.

Also, how did the date go?
 Magnus Bane
10:21:03 Mag/Maggy
I have a custom I love but I've reused it at least 5 times ;-;
 BellJake
10:16:30 Don't call me BJ.
Might have another flood in my room tonight </3
I hope not, I'm tired
 Burning Roses
10:12:48 Your local therapist
So many goddam gators >.>
 Nyx Ignis
10:11:20 
-WP Click-
when she's old enough, do you think she would have good pups with a 81R 93T voyager dyed stud?
 Purgatory
10:10:05 Purgatorio/Purge
I've designed one solid custom and reused it 4 times
 Werewolf
10:09:39 Lycan, My can
Sagittarius

I can understand. I just don't know if I want my character to be a crossbreed between a werewolf and a horse or if I want him to be a vampire.
 Magnus Bane
10:08:55 Mag/Maggy
Can someone help me design a custom ;-;
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10:06:32 Luna/Phantom
Mag
Very pretty different.

Lycan
I can't quite put my head on a werehorse but that is different.
 GetWolfy
10:05:20 
magnus bane she a pretty wolf
 Werewolf
10:04:14 Lycan, My can
I made a new character but I can decide if I want him as a shifter or as a werehorse.
 Magnus Bane
10:00:59 Mag/Maggy
Purge
Oh that's cool!
 Purgatory
10:00:02 Purgatorio/Purge
Mag
Been on that art grind, made a new OC today
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 Magnus Bane
09:56:38 Mag/Maggy
-WP Click-
She's.. different
 Magnus Bane
09:54:33 Mag/Maggy
Purge
Hello, how are you^^
 Purgatory
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Hey Mag :)
 Apothecary
09:50:03 Medicinally Autistic
It was really crazy to listen to the bobcat screaming though, absolutely terrifying to be honest. And seeing how it walked with the rabies was CRAZY.
 Apothecary
09:49:27 Medicinally Autistic
And like a lot of quills in the face is a sign of a rabid animal, because its aggressively trying to attack something it would normally avoid, but it only had like 11 quills, and it wasn't showing any signs of rabies.

But then, when they went to release it after taking the quills out of its face (it had been anesthitized for it)

When they went to released it it was literally screaming and instead of running away the bobcat like wobbled very weirdly towards them.

They ended up having to kill it, but it did test positive for rabies, even though it hadn't shown any signs until then.

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Help me/CritiqueJune 28, 2018 04:27 PM


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Something isn't settling well with me and this image... Could you guys help?

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Help me/CritiqueJune 29, 2018 08:42 PM


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You did a very good job, but I can see a few things that could be touched up on.

The cat's chest is facing us, but the entirety of it's side is visible. It's back wouldn't be able to twist like this so we should either see only part of the chest, or part of the side and back.

If you chose to keep the back instead of the front-facing chest, I would add a little more exaggeration to the back and maybe lose, or change, some of the fur detail. With cats, the elegant curve of the back is very noticeable.

If you decided to keep the front-facing chest, the back and hind legs would be behind it, though the curve would still be visible, of course.

The legs themselves are a little lumpy, compared to the graceful lines a cat has. The heels should be lower, and at a less extreme angle, while the knees would have a slightly shallower curve that blends gracefully into the body. The hindquarters could be rounder, and shorter to show where the hip bones are.

I've never been great with front-facing legs, but cats have slightly thicker, short forearms, usually. There might not be as deep a dip from shoulder to neck, and the most noticeable joint from the front of the leg would be the wrist curving slightly sloping outwards, thickening before becoming the paw.

The ears could be less rounded, though of course it depends on the breed or OC you were drawing. Cat ears are most often triangular, and I would set them a little higher up on the head while lengthening the cheeks. Cats have slightly round heads.

I would make the tail tuft thick and blend it into the tail more, rather than a separate piece of fur, but that one is more a personal preference.

I would love to draw little bits to visually represent my advice, but my tablet's too scratched up to pick up my pen, apparently. '-_- If I get it working again soon, I'll add some pics.

Edited at June 29, 2018 08:43 PM by The Watch

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