Wolf Play : Critique?

04:46:43 Mad Scientist

Thank you. ^.^

04:43:31 katy | beetle

frozen,
oo nice! congrats :0

04:42:36 Mad Scientist

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Was not expecting this from my pup boom.

04:41:17 katy | beetle

cat,
it's alright </3 i didn't use any items this time around so i didn't really expect anything amazing, lol

just hoping one of the other 4 i bred will pull through

04:36:34 Cat

Amy
It actually looks good too!

Katy
Nooo, that sucks :(

04:36:20 Amy/Anpmygdala

Gotta drive home, be back soon

04:34:03 katy | beetle

so far my HH and chim girls have both disappointed me. we'll see how the others do later e.e

04:31:43 Amy/Anpmygdala

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A random legendary pelt

04:31:11 Amy/Anpmygdala

Cat
I know right XD
I kept him for his looks

04:27:54 Cat

Yes I did! He is also gorgeous... love how the thylacine looks

04:27:14 Amy/Anpmygdala

Cat
Did you see his dad XD
He looks like some kind of a chim

04:25:57 katy | beetle

my girls are not doing well this spring e.o

04:23:13 katy | beetle

oop, the labors have begun. wonder if i'll get anything other than duds

04:21:32 Cat

Amy

Oh he is pretty!

The Veil

04:14:00

Bearlow

One day, I will beat you in battle. <3

04:13:33 Amy/Anpmygdala

Almost exact copy of his father
-WP Click-

04:02:31 Cat

Aww I appreciate it <3

03:57:16 Amy/Anpmygdala

Cat
Of course, your art is amazing XD

03:55:00 Cat

Aww <3 I would be honoured if you chose one from me :3

03:53:33 Amy/Anpmygdala

Cat
Awww that would be amazing <3
I had mine for half a year so i was thinking of a change XD

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04:46:43 Mad Scientist

Thank you. ^.^

04:43:31 katy | beetle

frozen,
oo nice! congrats :0

04:42:36 Mad Scientist

-WP Click-

Was not expecting this from my pup boom.

04:41:17 katy | beetle

cat,
it's alright </3 i didn't use any items this time around so i didn't really expect anything amazing, lol

just hoping one of the other 4 i bred will pull through

04:36:34 Cat

Amy
It actually looks good too!

Katy
Nooo, that sucks :(

04:36:20 Amy/Anpmygdala

Gotta drive home, be back soon

04:34:03 katy | beetle

so far my HH and chim girls have both disappointed me. we'll see how the others do later e.e

04:31:43 Amy/Anpmygdala

-WP Click-
A random legendary pelt

04:31:11 Amy/Anpmygdala

Cat
I know right XD
I kept him for his looks

04:27:54 Cat

Yes I did! He is also gorgeous... love how the thylacine looks

04:27:14 Amy/Anpmygdala

Cat
Did you see his dad XD
He looks like some kind of a chim

04:25:57 katy | beetle

my girls are not doing well this spring e.o

04:23:13 katy | beetle

oop, the labors have begun. wonder if i'll get anything other than duds

04:21:32 Cat

Amy

Oh he is pretty!

The Veil

04:14:00

Bearlow

One day, I will beat you in battle. <3

04:13:33 Amy/Anpmygdala

Almost exact copy of his father
-WP Click-

04:02:31 Cat

Aww I appreciate it <3

03:57:16 Amy/Anpmygdala

Cat
Of course, your art is amazing XD

03:55:00 Cat

Aww <3 I would be honoured if you chose one from me :3

03:53:33 Amy/Anpmygdala

Cat
Awww that would be amazing <3
I had mine for half a year so i was thinking of a change XD

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM